Dude, Contestshipping looks right when it's purely about Drew and May. You have to revert Ash's character in AdvanceShipping vs ContestShipping stories if you want her to be with Drew and it looks unrealistic. For example, here Ash stopped May from pursuing her dreams to be a Pokémon master himself. Can he do that ? The kind, caring, compassionate Ash ? Or that Max supports Drew instead of Ash ? The storyline was good but these things are complete crap ! Hope you'll do better in next stories...

Hey man, I am an Advanceshipper and I have nothing against contestshipping...But this is truly insane...You just messed up Ash's character...I don't like this story a bit...Make it more believable next time...

Great story! Very enjoyable, I'm glad may went with drew even though it was obvious for the beginning. Am I crazy for reading a gay subtext between Gary and ash in this? Was slightly disappointed this didn't pan out lol

Good story. I really enjoyed reading it, and this is coming from and Advanceshipper. I honestly have nothing against Contestshipping, though. Felt a bad for Ash, despite that he told May to give up her dream, it was wrong for her to chat on him that night. Made for a real interesting read. Though some of the characters behaved OOC, there were good explanations behind it. Keep writing, and I'll be reading your other stuff :)

Update soon

Yay May and Drew are together!
I felt pretty bad for Ash, I'm not an Advanceshipper but I like him.
I hope he'll be okay.
Awesome story! I really can't wait for the epilogue.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read.
Please update soon! I can't wait anymore, I want to know who May choose!
-AdorableSkitty

Oooohhhh! I like it! W

Thanks ALOT for dying five months ago and not continuing.

~Coralee

-glomps the author-

thank god that this story i alive! 8"D

anyways may x drew! contestshippy!

i hope you can update soon!

Drew all the way! Ash can have misty or dawn I don't care!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon D:

May x Drew for life 3

MAY HAS TO BE WITH DREW! she and ash would never work out. Besides, drew would have NEVER told may tp give up on her dream so he could follow his. Yes, i get that hes a coordinator too, but he prob would have fought fair, and if he won, he would help may improve and then help her win! ash is a thick headed jerk with NO PERSONALITY

Seriously, ash lost every bit of his personality in the middle of DP

That was such an amazing chapter I can't wait to read the next one keep writing and post the next chapter as soon as possible!

awesomeee :) i can't wait for the next chapter!