You are correct about "Peter Pan" being well-received in America, and you showed that well through America and his citizen's reactions. The story is even included in Disney and considered a popular classic. I've seen "Finding Neverland," and I liked it though it almost drove me to tears.

Good job on the characters and their feelings! It is like America and England to deny vulnerable feelings. I can imagine England being nervous because he is uptight. I guess America's opinion was a big deal for England because America is important to him. It's true that England sees like an overgrown child or a child trapped in an adult's body.

I like how they were comparing Neverland to their world. You used good analogies to talk about loss of innocence and how things can't go back the way they were, such as the death of a fairy being the end of childhood and inability to fly due to being tied down by burdens.

I nearly cried reading…
that, my friends, is why I have my #CinnamonRollProtectionSquad
Protect my innocent babies~
zomg that was…omg…indescribable…in a good way…

Awwww, this was so cute. The story of Peter Pan and Neverland ahs always been one of my favorites, but adding Hetalia? Well that makes it even better.

This story is great hehe wait till America in this fanfiction experiences Walt Disney's Magic. Till this day I could only turn to the movies Mr. Walt Disney made to make me feel like a giddy child waiting for another of his movies to show.

That was so lovely, and very in character!

*goes to the corner to sulk and think about wasted years of childhood*
I want to fly too!
It's wonderfull. Thank you.

Nice story. It worked well with how I imagine England and America acting with each other.

Oh, wonderful story!

Very good i was surprised that America liked it :D

TOO ADORABLE FOR WORDS OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS.

-.- Didn't realized that is was Peter Pan until it said so in the note. Well I really enjoyed this. I like stories that have inner depth and questions about life and etc...

Peter pan always makes me want to cry. The things America said ate things I think about all the time. Lovely.

I'm not logged in right now, but I want to say that your fanfiction is a breath of fresh air ;D I really loved this fanfiction because it was sweet. There was no kinky or cliche love scenes, but a relationship between two people with real emotions and thoughts. I really respect that!

The theme was great here too! Never growing up, eh? Sounds like a dream to me (a good dream) Peter Pan is awesome so the fact that you tied it to Hetalia is even more awesome ;3

Keep up the awesome work, and don't be too hard on yourself (hahahaxD)

Oh god. Beautiful, ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!

*wipes tear* I'm grinning like mad now. The whole fic was so awesome, and I loved the ending!