Incomplete with a cliffhanger. Why?

This was fantastic, I loved it! Should I like Moony smoking as much as I did? Because I really liked that, lmao. Nice job! :-)

Wow, I really love Remus like this!

Brilliant fic though I felt the end moved a bit fast (From Sirius asking Remus to teach him)

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i do like this, but i kinda felt the roles were reversed...

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me ha encantado esta historia

mmm. love them. love them so much. :) well done!

Really amazing!

If I wrote a story like this, I think I would put Sirius in Remus position and Remus in Sirius'. But I really liked it this way too!

Very nice. You get an Outstanding.

Only thing, it was so slow (that is the good slow) at first, but it seemed a bit rushed at the end. I could have gone for a few more paragraphs of that. :D Loved it. -Jenna

Aw that was cute fucking as.

I've never read a story where Moony is the one who smokes and has had sex.

It's always been Sirius who is like that, and I have to say I liked the change.

I think that you made it work spectacularly.

I loved it 3

Very interesting. I like "bad" Moony - the smoking, sexed-up Moony.

One thing that put me off was that your first couple of sentences are "run-ons".

Sometimes extremely long sentences leave the reader detached and they get really bored, all because the sentence is way too long, and too many ideas are strung together, and even if you do end up getting your point across, the meaning is lost, all because the sentence is too long.

See? Lol.

But I did get your meaning, and I loved the fic overall. Just remember that short sentences can result in a better impact for the reader.

Simply brilliant.

Another thing that irked me a wee bit is all the "girl" bashing. Hah, but that's just how society unfortunately views women (as the weaker sex). And I guess I can see Moony and Pads saying such remarks, so I'll let it slide. This is just the feminist in me reacting :p

Overall, nice job! :)

awesome!

head. splode. headsplode. head asplode... um. head explode?. head implode! Ya, that's it. My head imploded reading this.

this is FANTASTICALLY sexy. thank you so very much for writing an R/S where Remus is the aggressive, wicked, tantalizing topper. i loved it :D

Short, but good. I like that Remus is the experienced one since most people assume Sirius would be the man whore. Thanks for sharing. _

Oh my effing goblets!

I love a Remus who's a sex fiend!