| Reviews for Dawn's Epiphany |
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   MrLibrocubicularist chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 aaaaaaahhhhh. i can't stop laughing. this is so damn adorable. |
| cake0108 chapter 1 . 3/31/2017 Lol so adorable |
| reppad98 chapter 1 . 3/30/2017 Your explanation of how you thought of this story, about selecting parents for their genes, and then thinking about how Ash and Misty would have an uber baby was a really great ending XD Because they really would, like Dawn said haha. Orange and black striped hair made me grin as well haha. And while it was very amusing to read about Dawn gushing about how cute Ash and Misty would be together, and also about Brock agreeing, I was also wondering what the clue of this story was going to be, but I should have seen it coming that Ash and Misty were already dating haha. They're seventeen, so their reaction to Dawn's idea seemed a bit over the top, I would have expected more embarrassment and stuttering than this if they weren't together yet (because they secretly had thought about it). But it was a really fun story :) Oh, by the way, PokeshipperByHeart recommended this story to me :) Anyway, thank you for writing, I really liked this story, and keep writing! ! |
| Mistyfan girl chapter 1 . 2/16/2017 Oh my god you are so funny and your story is so cute. |
| Tropicallight chapter 1 . 3/14/2015 Haha this was good and funny too |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2014 X) X) I made a rap about this. Dawn is smarter than most people think, she knows how to link, true love with one look. Oh! Ash and Misty are her book, they know what she says it's true thank you for making this story now I'm not blue. Smart authors together, Pokeshipping forever! LIKE WHAT! XD |
| inScense09 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013 Ahhhhhhhh! Fangirling lol. An Ash and Misty baby...that would be perfect! |
| claraowl chapter 1 . 11/18/2012 KYaH! XD Yeah, that's happened to me, too... homework reaps odd fics. :) I looooooved this! |
| petites sorcieres chapter 1 . 10/12/2012 Oh my God that was sooo cute Thank you for this |
| pkmn2112 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012 I won't lie, it was FLUFFY! But it was enjoyable none the less. It was a fun little short story and aside from the very few grammar errors, there is really nothing to critique. So well done! ) |
| eiranerys chapter 1 . 4/23/2011 Really cute. I could totally imagine Dawn doing saying those things. XD |
| Daughter Of Poseiden chapter 1 . 1/27/2011 Hehe fluff balls |
| ATFMJ2018 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010 Lol. I love the ending part. Specifically "I love us." |
| AshandMistyLove chapter 1 . 8/16/2010 aww dat was sweet! I can imagine the baby now! red hair with brown eyes! or wait! Black hair with blue eyes? ARGH! I'm confused! XD LOL AAML:) |
| lolziwes chapter 1 . 5/12/2010 me too ... IM CHOKING... im better great story |
