HOT!

wow. just wow. amazing writing. amazing characterization. amazing story. YOU ARE AMAZING. please add on to this one day; i want to see more werewolf Kuro and vamp fai! thanks for the great read

Mind-blowingly hot.

Is there going to be a sequel to this 'cause I think it's really good

The pinball scene was amazing- I plan on seeing that particular clip from Bad Santa as your A/N said it originated from!

I think I love you ;) That was absolutely stunning, all of your scenes were perfect. Your writing was fantastic and I loved the thoughts and actions of the characters were absolutely perfect, and I could picture each scene in my head almost perfectly. All in all, this fic was absolutely job and keep up the good work

sequel!sequel! i want to see a story based on this oneshot !

Omg hot, hot, HOT! loved it, more please!

Mmmmmm THAT WAS SO WELL-WRITTEN AND HOT OMG. I wish there's more, but I really can't complain since what's written is just about perfect! LOVE IT!

this is at least the 3rd time i've read this story and it still gets me every time. why i never reviewed it before, is beyond my compression. it really is a masterpiece. great narration and style and it fit Kurogane so well, and Fai too! its incredibly realistic with just enough attention paid to detail. the pinball scene is forever engraved in my memory (and i'm not just saying that). and its not exactly plotless cuz you give just enough background on them, with the vampxwolf scenario and setting description. by the way, this is definitely the most creative and interesting vampxwolf story i've ever read, not just in the kurofai fandom. so really thanks for such an amazing piece. good luck! :D

... -dies-

Soo much love.. And a bit a French in there? Merde? Oh so yummy... I had to fan myself halfway though. -drooling- They were so in character.. Gah! You've got me incoherent!

-heart-

I want a blond sex pot to go... TT_TT Keep up the amazing writing!

-Machi

... How do I explain?... I Freaking Love You!

That was the best thing I've read in a long time!I bow to you completely! I agree that if you edited this... the only thing that would be left was the fact that the arcade exsisted XD

this was amazingly hot! im glad you didnt edit it!

Kurogane is SO a werewolf, how can that last line NOT make it so completely obvious? XD

This was so well written and I swear this is the best KuroFai lemon out there! You did well on the descriptions making sure not to go overboard with them XD just awesome~

And I return for another lengthy review spewing with LOVE.

I was reading this as well in English, and hot /damn/ this was so effin' /sexy/. xD I can't think of any other way to say it, than to be blunt like Kurogane himself.

They're personalities fit once more to a T - the "explosive" side showing more than the "calm". Geebuz, Fai's a tease more than Kurogane was being, I'd say. So perfect, pft. -hearts-

I also love everything inbetween the text, it was just as much the story as everything else. Most people focus only on the characters and not the objects around them, and usually not on the over-world thoughts and such. It makes it so much more complete.

50 cent pinball? Man, ours is 75. Still havn't nabbed a free game either. -pout-

THIS WAS AMAZING. FAVORITED AND LOVED BEYOND HUMANLY MEANS~

- Wafflez