SO SAAAAAD! If only there were follow up chapters!

Oh. My. God. WAH! YOU MUST WRITE MORE! I LOVE ANGSTY LEO!

Seriously, update for the love of all that is good and honorable in this world! ;)

SO heartbreaking! I love it.

Leo needs a hug. He is always hard on himself. Wow. It is not easy being the oldest and the leader of your family. Leo is a brave warrior no matter what.

Love this story

Aw...poor Leo. Great one shot though.

Aw... Poor Leo.

I finally got round to going through my massive inbox with all those stories I'd put in the 'read' pile. XD

This is really. A nice insight into Leo's mind as to how he feels whenever he doesn't quite come out on top of everything. And it's not overly whiny like most I've read, which is great! Leo is allowed to whine, like everyone else, but not to the extent of becoming so boring. This didn't do that. :D

It had a good ending too. Like this wasn't going to go away as soon as I read this, it's something he will always search for, and it really suits his character.

So well done! It was great to read. :D

That one shot...wow...Leo always beats himself for other people's mistakes. Keep up the good work.

Wow. This is amazing! Poor Leo. Great work!

-A.U. '05

Cool story!

Poor Leo, His family will break him someday!

Continue with the awesome work!

Aww...poor Leo. Nice one shot.

I know how overwhelming things can get. I, unfortunately can't concentrate on updating at the moment. I've tried, but failed miserably. :( I hope that things are going ok for you now, and keep the stories comin'. I'm enjoying them. :)

*wipes tears away* That was a beautiful story. Poor Leo. He always seems to come down on himself even though everyone loves him. It's a good story about Leo.