Sigh . . . That was perfect. So romantic and well perfect. ;)

Oh, my that was awesome! This is the work of genius! I've never seen anything so short and well developed at the same time...kudos!

Hey, I'm so glad you gave this category a new story, even if, like you said, it is just a little snippet (which was nice, by the way). It is amusing that it sounds at first as though she is before her torturer, but for Mel I suppose she is! Has to blank herself out so she can even remotely function! : )

Eve

that was adorible! plz write some more! i just loved it!

I really loved this little slice about Mel and loved how subtle his presence was; just the warmth of his hand as an introduction :)