"You're mom's downstairs with Phil..." YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. You should've used YOUR.

"peaking my curiosity instantly" It's PIQUEING..

Oh no

I LOVED THE ENDING! IT WAS BEAUTIFUL

Your story was so nice
It actually made me cry a few times, I loved it️

Oh I completely forgot about this story. I'm so glad I found it again after so many years. Still such an excellent read. Loved how unique your story line was and your characters were fun.
The first chapters were difficult to read especially with what Bella was going through but you turned it into a beautiful story.

Just thougt you should know...I'm in love with this story. I'm putting a link to it on my list of favourites on a google doc so I never forget it. Thankyou so much 3

I wish we got to see how bella, edward and Lily coped with Lily going to school...Also can't they go to disneyland as a whole family for a week and then on the last day bella and edward get married and bella wear a blue wedding dress that lily helped pick and lily a pink bridesmaid dress and edward and both lily and bella have to wear a crown. Then it would be lily's happily ever after story. then the family could take lily home after the disneyland wedding and bella and edward could go on a 2 week honeymoon :) 3

I'm hoping Bella has realised and accepted now that she is Lily's mommy. Maybe Bella will ask Lily on her birthday if she can be her mommy and maybe the nigt before her birthday just as it's turning midnight Bella begs Edward to let her be her Mommy and they "recreate" how Lily should of been made from the start...surrounded by the love of her parents... and that is now what Edward will think of when he thinks of Lily's beginnings... along with Bella's reaction to seeing newborn photos of her baby lily 3 love this beautiful family

I'm kinda enjoying this story but these people are seriously annoying!

First of all... Ha, this made me laugh... alright, fine. But I'm not letting you skip your workout if you break your neck" such a goog Emmett quote. And secondly i bet bella will like the new batman more :P :D

I wasn't upset at all with Bella this chapter. Your authors note at the top had me worried but I read and found Bella to be just as sweet and incredible as always. LOVE this story. You handle it so delicately, it's almost painfully beautiful at times and you balance the tragiv sadness with such beautiful family moments better then any tightrope walker ever could:) 3

please could you send me the outtake of Charlie and Alice's conversation? I've been reviewing whe I have a comment to make and I am absorbed in your story despite the fact I really should be sleeping.

ugh, I keep crying and I think I'm bursting bloodvessels in my face from the stress. I feel like I am Edward because of the way you write. I feel it with him. As for Bella I think she will do everything in her power to protect lily,... mind, heart body everything...the thing is i have a feeling bella will be brutally attacked because of it. Please let Lily not be in the same room.

yeeeeeeeeee. i absolutely loved that story! i have no words. no words can describe how much i loved it