| Reviews for Never More Than Eternal Rivals |
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SuzumeHatake895 chapter 19 . 3/20 One of my favorite fanfics! :3 |
Novva chapter 7 . 6/13/2019 God! The true horror I felt when I read that Minato had shaved his head! I'm okay with a lot of things, but this? I simply can't. His, รด so glorious hair, how could you? This horrifying vision shall haunt my waking days, and sleeping nights... Jokes (and shock) aside, a truly wonderful story, yet again! I wonder what you'll say about the real Team Minato, if they'll even be a part of the story (I suppose so, but in The Sixth Hokage, I remember you writing that Rin was still alivesomething you'll explain here, maybe?), but I surely hope so. I'm glad Minato is such a large part of this story, since I really love the guy (not as much as Kakashi maybe, but a truly awesome character!btw be careful, he's supposed to be only 10 years older than Kakashi, conflicting a little with your first Team Minato.), and it's wonderfully well-written, as always. The characterization is also on point, and I applaude you for this... I'm not sure I have the right adjectives... let's just settle with incredible (even if it's so much more) story! Thank you, infinitely, for all of your writing, and please, please and please, keep updating ! |
Afaaf chapter 19 . 7/15/2017 is this story going to be continued? Pls pls say so. This is a great story. I am really looking forward to knowing what happens next. I mean Kakashi just got introduced to the infamous Icha Icha. I'm really anticipating the next chapter. |
Phoenix51 chapter 19 . 6/24/2017 WELCOME BACK! You have been severely missed. Thank you sooo much for updating this wonderful story, please continue! |
Prescripto13 chapter 19 . 6/13/2017 That moment right before Kakashi "zoned out" with Inoichi and Jiraiya gave me the chills. I can understand why Inoichi was unsettled afterwards! |
Lightningscar chapter 19 . 6/9/2017 Well that was interesting :) Always interesting to see Kakashi, no matter his age, interact with the different Sannins. Throw in Inoichi (though it was kinda weird for the Yamanaka to "threaten" the Sannin and calling him gramps, as there is only 12 or so years between them) and you get an interesting mix indeed. Nice seeing Jiraiya trying to help Kakashi figure out what his trigger(s) were, and Inoichi quickly getting a suspicion of what was going on. Hehe. Poor poor Takumi/Takomi XD The horror of Genins XD Have to say, did a bit of research, trying to find out if he was a canon character or an OC... alongside the other names XD Interesting friendship... and nickname Inoichi had for him XD Wonder what is the reason for that XD Hehe. An Uchiha with a mischievious side? Ought to be fun XD Hehehe. Takumi/Takomi wasn't the only one who wasn't expecting that XD Laughed so hard at that scene XD Though, Jiraiya should probably keep that quiet from Tsunade and Minato. Curious to see what happens next :) Take care :) Yours sincerely, Lightningscar |
SilverDragonCoin chapter 19 . 6/9/2017 I'm so glad to see this story updated and am definitely looking forward to more. I love Kakashi and Jiraiya's interactions in this chapter and how genuinely Jiraiya wants to help Kakashi despite really not wanting to know how bad it really is. (Though, Jiraiya, really? You don't give eight year olds porn.) Going back for a reread, now. |
the leaf 180 chapter 19 . 6/8/2017 wow, i definitely didnt expect to see this fic updated ever again! I'm so happy to see it did, though! You added so much intrigue and detail in this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next! it's great that you havent given up because you're fics are definitely some of the greatest 3 |
Catacroker chapter 19 . 6/8/2017 Great to see you back! I love this story, and the way you write. Thanks! |
ScarecrowKakashi chapter 19 . 6/8/2017 Yay thank you for another chapter. I didn't quite feel loss as I was reading this. You left enough clues to get an idea of what had happened previously. But I will be rereading this story from the beginning and hopefully we'll be seeing updates from you again! |
coriamber2014 chapter 19 . 6/7/2017 Yay! You're back! Another great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next to poor Kakashi. |
coriamber2014 chapter 18 . 9/14/2016 please update soon |
LaforayaWattpad chapter 18 . 6/7/2015 SUKE! (So cool!) I reqlly liked this story. I wish there were more aurthors like you! |
Phoenix51 chapter 18 . 2/10/2015 Another fantastic chapter, the depth that you are able to give each character without using long-winded details is very impressive. Thank you for the update, please continue! |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/27/2014 I was listening to Numb by Link in Park, and it totally matched this chapter! |