Just thought I'd point this out, but the 14th's name is Nea, not Cain. That's actually in the manga.

This story is really good! Good story like yours is the main reason that still keeps me involve in this site despite my busy schedule. However, I do want to point something out. I strongly encouraged you to proof-read the stories before publishing it because it will improve reader's experience. I hope to read more of your stories soon! :) 頑張って!

Hey there! Amazing story! Thanks for writing it :)

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VampireLoveStory

Pretty good :) I felt it a little bit rushed tirades the end, but still-very good, loved it :)

I loved this fic! amazing! but i wished the epilogue was more detailed.

This was a great story! I liked it! But I got to ask one question, what happened to Krorykins? Or was he not important, because I didn't remember him being mentioned much. Not that I'm complaining or anything! I was just wondering.

Sniff sniff. So sad, it's over... Wah! It was a good ending, thought, to a great series! Congratulations!

Damn, you didn't mess around with finishing this story. Amazing, truly amazing. I loved every part of it, although I do wish the Epilogue was more detailed.

Ja mata

Yay!~ It's okay! They're all alive! A wonderful ending to a horrible life for all of them, ne? I can't believe Kanda laughed, it kinda freaked me out... And Yoru's blade/new attack thingy reminds me a ton of Ichigo Kurosaki from Bleach's released state. I swear. Please update again soon!~ This chapter made me really happy! :D Yay yay yay I could dance!

Nice story ) update soon

Cool~

You saved Allen's life, brought in Yoru's dad, and made it all fit. Good job! Please update soo, this is an interesting development!

What are the odds. Yoru's dad is pretty cool. I hope Kanda and Lavi are ok when they go against the Noah. Something tells me time is going to be repeating itself when it comes to Kanda and Alma. Please update soon.

Ja mata

What an original title lol. I understand that you have a life outside of this story, but could you try not to make the wait too long, please? Like, you should have some time on the weekends, to type a paragraph or two, right? So if you do that, slowly, after a few weeks, it'll be finished.

Yoru's innocence isn't going away so easily. I hope she is able to get out of there soon. I really doubt the earl is going to leave her alive for very long. She doesn't seem to have much use anymore, but I'm sure Alma would want to keep her around. I am very curious as to what happens to Yoru and Alma's relationship. Please update soon.

Ja mata

KYA

PLZ CONTINUE IT!

GYAH

THEY KISSED HOW CUTE!