Great job on the story, I loved it :)

hmmmm where to start...I LOVED IT ALL!
I was pretty sketchy reading mpreg, but since my friend told me about a chinese novel about mpreg, I started searching for it and your story kept popping up! So here I am!
For the review...I loved the fact that everyone in Roxas family already had children and their description sounds super adorable, I wish to hug em all!
Going into the background of some of the characters was good, and it made me sympathize with the troubled past of the characters, especially Axel (just because I recently read a yaoi involving a trouble Seme that literally was the same as Axel, so good). Roxas wants me to hug him so bad also! He literally went to hell and back TWICE, but at least he visited heaven with those lil babies being born (minus dying part) a sweet moment. Also, giving Roxas 5 babies...i'm just trying so hard to imagine it because he must have been huge as a house!
Sorry for the long review, just in summary I loved everything about the story, binged read it because it was so cute and I loved every moment of it. KEEP UP AWESOME WORK!

Best ever!

I love this story!Your a great author keep on writing!

I would be right there with you Nana, sittin at that door for "research" XD

LOL, Nana, you crack me up with your notes at the end. I swear, if Axel burned my manga, and heaven forbid my YAOI? I don't care how hot he is, he will gain the first-hand experience of hell.
Oh my glob, this chap had me in tears. They never fell out of my eyes, but they definitely welled up )':

I caught it. I totally peeped it. When I read it I was like "...wait what? Oh, she'll probably bring it back up again later"
Score one for the Chriss-Meister!

Awe I hate to see this go! I really like the story plot and everything! :( please don't this go to the waistside you have a awesome heart touching story that brought me to tears a bit at the end because it was the last awesome chapter in it and I'm really looking toward to the sequel to this so please PLEASE don't forget about it you are a really good writer and I would hate to see this story go! So with that being said I hope you find time to come back to it.
Thanks! :D

Awe man I'm sad to see this go! (I know I'm like a thousand years late for this reveiw) do you think you can make the sequel to it? I really liked the plot and the story! Hopefully you can get back to it. Thanks for the awesome and tear shedding moments I really enjoyed it don't stop writing! ! :D

Can there be another sequel? ;_; pu-leaseeeeeee? *sobs*

I hate you. But I love you! I'm crying too hard to read the screen ;_;

Love the story. Know it's an old one but I love it all the same.

I loved the story! It was amazing!

x3 I thought you were going to name the 5th one Roxel , since he looks like a bet like Roxas and Axel and all xD

It is possible.
It's just rare.
so far . . . i likey.