Wonderful! This is the best story that I have read on
. Keep writing!

It's beautiful.

I wish I could say something else that would describe it, that would do it justice - but I really can't.

Meh. I'll try anyways.

You made all of them more believable than any author I have ever read. From Thalia to Phoebe to Luke to Artemis to Abigail and Mary and Dagger who I never knew until now. Never did I have to stop and question if what I just read is accurate. Never did I have to stop and consider anything that didn't flow like water, all silvery and smooth. The images you make, the pictures you paint - it's incredible

You take a thought, an idea, an image - you make it real for us.

I wish I could tell you more...

Wow. I feel like I'm in shock, after reading it. I feel like I just left my body _

Both of you are amazing, beyond any words. Thank you so very much for sharing this.

All of them.

Are you ever going to finish this?

This...I...ah, shit. So good I'm literally speechless right now.

This is really good

I really liked it. It was pretty deep at some parts, which made it more interesting to read, and the words themself were, like, WOW. However, I thought chapter three was REALLY short, and I found it a little strange the way Thalia spoke to Artemis. I don't think Artemis would let her lieutenant talk to her like that. It seemed like Thalia was the superior instead of Artemis at that part. But I also really liked all of Thalia's conversations with Abigail. Well written.

Raindrop

I-I-wow.

If I listed all the reasons why your story is the bomb, I would use around fifty reviews. I have to pinch myself to make myself remember I'm not reading a best-selling novel.

I love the story and how you potray the Huntress, not many people go into detail about the huntress or write a story about them in general, great job. Update when you can.

Bye bye Abigail. :'(

Well, I got to the end of chapter 4, and was VERY displeased that the little arrow I would usually click on to go to the next chapter was not there. You both write wonderfully and I wish you'd update soon!

P.S. On a side note, I was told that this would be a rape fic...not that I'm disappointed or anything, but I'm just wondering if I'm confusing this fic with another? Either way, I'm glad I stumbled upon this little piece of gold :)

I hate you two. I want to know what she said :'(

It's so good, I nearly cry with how good it actually is.

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What can I say? Amazing doesn't even cover it.

~Jess.

Wow. Your writing (both of you) is absolutely breathtaking. You describe every moment, every scene with such brilliant text that I can imagine this story with all five of my senses.

I impatiently and enthusiastically await you next update :)

Very, very well done.

Your characterization is simply amazing. Thalia was just screaming- well- Thalia. I loved all of the Hunters, although I would have preferred to see their feelings towards Thalia shown rather than written out, I understand why you chose to do it that way.

Abigail's death scene being stretched out didn't have the same cheap feel to it that such a trick normally does- it actually felt quite realistic.

Kudos to you. I wish I had more to say, but alas, I have no more words. Fantastic.

Smiles,

LOT7