Pretty good start.

Perfetta!

Shit garbage trash go kill yourself naruto is the fucking orange wearing idiot go back to the shithole you call a home and cheap one penny prostitute of a mother and trash pull out game Father. GO KILL YOURSELF

One of the best fics I’ve ever read so far, excellent story.

Great job S.o.t.a. This story has some of the best fight scenes I've read on fanfiction. I enjoy reading your work. Excelsior

64 chapter of crap

This chapter has been fairly disappointing for me. It's not that your overall quality has dropped or anything, but you've seemed to start having a problem of keeping track of your story's continuity.

You keep having Naruto say and do things that are not expected of his character or just plain stupid. Why in God's name would anybody take Choji's attack head-on? He could have easily rolled to the side or just moved, substituted, etc. Normally I wouldn't make a big deal out of this, but the only reason I even thought you put it in was to make the fight seem somewhat close.

Another thing is that from time to time your dialogue seems to slip from actually seeming like real dialogue to the characters feeling like robots. It's not enough currently to be a major problem although it might be in the future. (to clarify here I mean that it's readable, but it brings the reader out of the story. Whenever I read a scene that has this problem of unrealistic dialogue; I end up commenting on it in my head. It breaks up your stories flow.)

The final problem is that you have a few grammar issues. It's readable, but it has the same problem as the dialogue. I have to pull myself out of the experience of your story to try and piece together what you said. The most jarring of these was the "lay a finger on you bloody you pretty good..." part. I had to reread it a few times because the language that was used was not concise.

This is a really good story and is well written. Sad that it was abandoned but life happens

2cnd time rereading this will not be the last time I do either

Okay, I have always loved the trope where an intelligent Naruto just steals someone's test, always good for a laugh. But when you had him just grab that guys head and repeatedly bash it into the desk before he stole the sheet... I FUCKING LOST IT! That was hilarious, really absolutely effin loved that. Im gonna be chuckling for days about that.

ok

Great job

SOOO STUPID... in the end he still gets hit with a seal and still becomes weak as shit in his fights...

IF i wanted a weak Naruto I would just watch CANON. What you proved in your fanfic is that NAruto is weak whether he is with Zabuza or in Konoha as he was in CANON.

I had some hope that you wouldn't do bullshit and repost CANON as your fanfic but I was wrong.

I’m pretty sure minaka takahara was from a hentai

Why do you play with my hopes ?!
After briefly imagining kakashis realization that Naruto is alive, and then hoping for a reunion between him and Hinata, you give the mission to team Asuma :')
Will shikamaru figure out who Ronin is?
Loving the story :)