Don't worry! I understood it perfectly. I loved the story. Still, did you have to break my heart into a million pieces?

i rly like this story! read it first on dA...kinda too lazy to comment there...but i will! XXD loved it tho! sad the mello died, but i liked the relationship between the two and such um yea XD

~Lord Rebecca-Sama

ok...THAT WAS UNDENIABLY, PERFECTLY, AMAZINGLY AMAZING!

I loved it! It was exactly what I wanted but couldn't type myself! (every time i tried I'd end up all depressed...)

I love angst and you used just the right amount, the flashbacks were a cool idea, and the lime was just enough to add a little spice without making it to hot.

This is OFFICIALLY one of my ALL TIME favorite stories!

Thank you so much for making it perfect!

~Oddie

yay! (runs around in circles, cheering for this story until falls down and dies from lack of oxygen) I LOVE THE ENDING! I think either final line would have worked, but your choice really decides what the story means. In the case of your choice, it gave the story a meaning. It's a bit more powerful, I think. Thank you for no lemon in the church. That's a bit too far, even for you. Is the irony in the idol line, since it is against Mello's religion to worship idols? I have no sense of humor right now. Go being sick. Anyway, now that I'm dead (see above parenthetical phrase), I will spend a good portion of eternity cheering this song on from the depths of my own personal dead land, as I observe your oddness from my death. Please excuse strange comments on the fact that I'm sleep deprived, sugar high, and didn't take my meds today. If you haven't guessed, I love this story. Nice flashbacks, very well written in general. I like how it was inspired by lyrics but is not a songfic. Just very good in general. And just so you know, this is the longest review I have ever written.

Sincerely,

DIMS

P.S,: We actually had apple pie, so my random babbles were relevent for once.