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A123b456c789d0 chapter 6 . 6/21/2010
im guuessing next person she'll see is paige

i noticed you mispelled especially and wrote excpessilly

great chapter and update soon!
alltimealexandria chapter 5 . 6/20/2010
"'Like I care about the day of my birth,' she had replied, smiling sluggishly.

'But I care about the happy,' he replied, before going back to his instrument."

Haha, that made me smile. I can't wait to see what Craig says to Ellie. Update soon! :)
alltimealexandria chapter 4 . 6/20/2010
Aww, I'm glad that she's okay... physically. She still seems like a wreck emotionally. I feel so bad for them all. :/ This is a sad story, but a great one.
alltimealexandria chapter 3 . 6/20/2010
Hmm, I'm not going to suggest anything. I've usually found that the author's ideas work the best for the story. :) Anyway, great chapter, so dramatic! Your descriptions are amazing. The way each character reacted is exactly how I'd expect them to react in the show. Very in-character. Impressive. Onto the next chapter!
alltimealexandria chapter 2 . 6/20/2010
You really describe the characters' emotions well, and the characters themselves. Great job :) Now I'm nervous though... I hope she's okay.
alltimealexandria chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I'm glad that you continued, because this is a good story, and I'm going to go read the rest of the chapters now. :) Great idea, great execution. Good job.
A123b456c789d0 chapter 5 . 6/19/2010
hopefully this summer b/c i really enjoy reading your story

great chapter i always wonder the many ways marco could have found out

update soon!
ShatteredHeart15 chapter 4 . 12/21/2009
i like it alot cnt wait for the nxt chapter
TheOfficalGleek chapter 4 . 12/20/2009
soo glad you updated cant wait to see what happens to Ellie next :)
Serenity Silverwolfe chapter 3 . 12/15/2009
OMG please don't kill her! Ellie is my fave character, i knew what she was going through when she cut, I even went through that stage in my life and more than once I've thought about turning to it, its a fantastic story and I wish to read more hurry and post the next chap!
TheOfficalGleek chapter 3 . 12/6/2009
this chapter was... perfect amazingly so i think Ellie should live but dis Craig cause i am not a fan of Crellie a fan of Sellie i am though tee hee there were no subtle hints there lol but if anything no i do no think Ellie should get with Craig and i do not think i would be able to handle it if you killed Ellie
ShatteredHeart15 chapter 3 . 12/6/2009
i like it alot plez keep ellie livin lol :)
LillyHalliwell chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
More please! I want to know what happens! BTW, don't doctors usually tell the immediate family of the person their condition?
toolezbionic chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
very good story! update soon!
A123b456c789d0 chapter 2 . 11/29/2009
hope ellie is okay

great chapter

update soon!
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