Mmm quite an interesting story you got here :D Perhaps even more so since I don't know the actual game you hav set the story in? AUs are often interesting to explore. Quite a bone you threw us at the end of the previous chapter, but eh, thinking back, didn't Yuuko also appear early in the story briefly? It's been an enjoyable read so far and hope for more in the future.

i lik it. update soon plz

Arrgh! You're driving me mad with speculations! Can't wait to see if our Hero's going to make the first move... though I do like the idea that Watanuki's real clingy to Doumeki... heheheh

Good job on all the chapters and I do wish that you'll have longer chapters. Waiting for your next update!

Interesting story.

Hi, welcome back!

Not too long, but not all your chapters are long. But they are very good quality shorts. Personally, I want to see more 104 action later on.

Gosh sake that is good chapter.

No excuse necessary. A midget chapter is always better than nothing. As a fellow writer, I know how hard it is to get chapters out, so I thank you for the midget chapter. (I'm currently on hiatus due to writer's block and computer problems, so my fans are less than pleased with me.)

I hope you manage to get some time to work on this again soon! Until then, I'll be waiting \o/

you left quite a suspense though. :)

oh man oh man oh man! I've missed this story!

Though the size of the last chapter was kinda a disappointment, it was still nice to read, and I can't wait for more~

wait whaaaa! you can't just leave it on a cliffhanger like that. i'm fully calling the Unjust Cliffie Committee.

i wanna know what haaappppeeennnnssss :)

lol midget chapter? xD i thought this was forgotten :( but yay for update ;D

Nice story~ Interesting plot, and I can't wait to see what happenx next!

O_O is he turning into a woman?

lol jk xD

Okay.

I've just stumbled upon this fic of yours yesterday, and made made my way to finish all the chapters today.

It was beautiful. The set, the mood, the language you use to describe those sets and mood. I can see that you're so much of a vocabulary geek, in a good way. The style fits perfectly with the story. I have never heard of this game yet I already feel familiar with it. And do I mind the OOCness?

This is the first time I do not. The first time since I first read fanfictions. It clicks. Everything is in place so I have no complaint whatsoever. But one thing I'm curious about is the meaning of Watanuki's foreign speech, though.

Anyways keep going!

Cool. Great. It is very nice and very cool. Pretty cool.