This was a wonderful read. It was light hearted and fun, just enough angst to keep it realistic and interesting. Thanks!

I am happy to find a fic that has Jack loving Ianto first. You are making me cry, though. Good job!

AAHH I love this story! That bit how you made the actual Torchwood story into a book that Jack was writing was pretty cool, by the way. I felt like I could feel everyone's emotions as I was reading, which I have rarely felt while reading a story, since I'm usually a pretty detached person.
This made me want to laugh and want to cry. Good job and keep writing!

Really enjoyed this AU...and love that Jack was writing books about Torchwood. Well played.

Loved it

Oh my heart is broken for them. I just want to cry..they miss each other so much. Sorry I waited until Ch 12 to review. I am enjoying this story so much. Adore their banter.

Funny saying no the only Mrs Harkness when eluding to Jack when it obviously means Ianto took his name ... being the girl. LOL

Jack can be such an arse

ha! liked the stripping bit.

Why did he bite her? Might be good to explain that, will keep reading

that was a great story, a lovely final story for someone leaving the fandom _ thank you for the lovely read!

A lovely story. I'm sad it's finished.

Ugh I need to sleep. Why can't this be an audio book too. Honestly I'm not sure how many times I've read this. If I think about I could probably remember the who thing nearly completely, swear it gets better each read though (:

I hade gastro on my birthday last year and I was that pathetic too. I remember thinking the tile floors were the greastest thing ever.

great story, beautifully written - any epilogue or sequel planned? would love it!