I've had to setup a new authorname to go with my new account because I suddenly one day found out that I couldn't login anymore usng my old authorname and password. I've continued this story and all my other stories using the new StargateFFWriter authorname so anybody who's still interested can now read all of these on my authorpage.

I'm using my reviews wall to respond to Bane's and Will's reviews.

Bane, glad you like the basic story idea and the direction in which I'm taking it. Don't worry, I didn't take your criticism too seriously.

Will, glad you love the story so far and conisder it one of your favorite Stargate fanfic stories. Yeah, I consider this site to be a much-needed haven after we had to endure the powers that be cancelling Stargate. Glad I was able to contribute to making this fanfic site's Stargate SG-1 section a safehaven for you!

Love it so far, with no new stargate shows on TV this site has become my safehaven, and this story is one of my favorites.

This is a good story, i like the plot and where its going.

Now for the negatives, don't get to caught up in them though.

- Your spelling and grammar is maddeningly bad!

- Thats it for now.

Hey,Darkplayer. Thank u so much for takin the time to read n comment on chap 9. I'm glad u like the style I've envsioned for my version of the Furlings. I puspoely avoided taking the apparent route of envisioning the Furlings as furry creatures.

Am currently still workin on the story-have several chaps already in development. Such kind praise as yours encourages me highly to continue and put lots of effort into imrpoving the later chapters of the story.

Awesome story. I like the whole Furling development and design. I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story is developed. Please update soon.

Greetings! Here I am as promised! I read this chapter in the late hours of the night some time ago, and have only now had a chance to write you.

The idea is interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing how you imagine the furlings to be - and if they are cute and fuzzy as Jack suspected!

You did lose me at parts though. While I think your plot has some promise, you need to proofread your work at bit more. I'm pretty sure "ingenuitysome" is not a word! The frequent /'s are also distracting, and your work would improve simply by removing as many as possible.

Also, I'm having just a little trouble with your characterizations, and by that I mean whether or not the characters are acting as fans of the show would expect them to. For instance, Siler has never been seen to work the control room, so it's surprising that he announces the unscheduled offworld activiation, especially when we quickly learn that Walter is there on duty. Sam and Jack are still not of equal rank, so it surprised me to see Sam calling Jack by his first name, something she has always resisted even when he has resigned or retired.

I think you will find that your work will come to life better if you avoid generalizations, as well. When Sam says, "I think I'm done working on everything I need to do and all the unofficial tasks I do using my spare time." it strikes me as odd because it is so general. Try being more specific. Mentions something in particular, something fans will recognize. That will lend a great deal to the credability to your story, especially if you want it to fall into canon.

I hope this has been helpful. I will continue reading and reviewing your work in this manner. If you have any questions, don't hesitiate to write me! :)

Hi werd. I'm hopin u'll be readin the reviews again so that u can read my response. I couldn't respond to u via mail b/c u don't have an account here, but to post a story u'll have to sign up- function in uppper left hand corner.

Thank u for ur 2 reviews on 1 day for 2 diff chapters. Glad u like the basic idea; I felt from my total deductions perhaps believeing Furlings to be elves made the most sense.

U present an intriguing story idea. I'm curious about how explain Anubis creating them and thier character traits. By all means, go ahead to write and post. U have the imagination to be a Stargate FF author, and a very original one too considering this particular idea.

that,s odd! the asgard in your story where like the furling I

imagined. a case of reversal, any way maby thier should be

more action in the story, any way good story. I was thinking of

doing a story where anubis creates the Aschen as a replacement

for humanity!now how do you post things to this site

funny no one really knows what the furling lool like mayby big

heads and short with big eyes, inbetween human and asgard.

only a theory, but good idea you picked for a story.

Interesting story, I look forward to seeing more of it unfold. I would suggest a little more description of the battle taking place and a bit less discussion about the battle, but that's just me. Thanks for writing this and keep up the good work!

I've really enjoyed this story so far and would so enjoy reading more. Thanks for sharing.

7 and 8, good work, the supplimentry information works a treat, helps with the story a great deal

Ray

Sean very well done, the odd misplells din't even throw me this time Lol. But it gets better with each chapter. I was wondering myself on how to bring back the Asagrd but gave up and put it in the too hard basket and I'm not one for bringing out the old "Alternate Universe" thing, though reading yours it gives me some ideas.

Ray

reading with continuing intrigue Sean, I'm really getting absorbed into it

Ray

Continuing excellence with but a teeny few typo's, but hey I do it myself...all the time, Very intriguing how superior minds think alike Sean, I myself have always believed the Furlings to be like the LOTR elves. In fact I have mentioned several times in vrious threads on Gateworld, and recently before I read these last two chapters, included them in some short story posts. Keep it up, I'm enjoying this. BTW what word processor do you use? I had a lot of trouble with spelling and typo's that neither Word or Corel would pick up, I'm now using a free download, Open Office, which is fabulous. One small critique, would not the Furlings wish to meet with say a joint meeting of World leaders, rather than only the US Pres?

Ray