I like this one. Yeah, its odd, but poetic. I would read a story that goes off of this.

Beautiful description as always :)

Have to say, my favorite part was probably the theme of black and white versus color! Thought it was a great dramatic piece, even for people who haven't played Final Fantasy (like me ;)

Very good description! the flow of the words and its play was nice! :) great job. loved the story too!

Noctis. :D

MB IT IS SO SOSOSOSOSOSO GOOD! Wait... next review

I WASN"T FIRST! ;O(

Excellent piece.

Love the description that you used to describe their first meeting.