You really got the nail on the head when writing everyone's characters! I love how rich and descriptive your writing is! You're a fantastic writer. I hope you continue this soon. It's really good. Take care

Hi! I love this story and Opposing Forces too! This one a little more because I feel like Astro is basically me here. But then again that one is so painful and I love fictional pain way more than I should lol. I'm not in any other fandoms or I'd read your other stories because you're an amazing writer. Keeping my fingers crossed for you to get the motivation to write some more!

Please, please, please finish this story! I can't beg hard enough, I've never identified with a character so well! This is no contest my favorite fanfic ever for any fandom! I need to know what happens! I don't know if you'll even see this, but if you do please finish the story! It doesn't even have to be really long just please tell us what happens! I think I love this story almost as much as I love the episodes (2003 is my favorite), but they never had cliffhangers!

I love this story, please finish it! It's just like watching the episodes! I need to know what happens!

This is so awesome and so well written! I look forward to the next chapter!

I like this, it's good. I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter. Good luck!

It seems all of Astro's emotions are amped up.

Yay your continuing it!

I had to reread the first two chapters because I had pretty much completely forgotten what had happened so far. I recognized the story instantly when it showed up in an email alert, though. I never thought the story would update again, but I'm so glad I was wrong!

I really love just the inherent way that you write, and the little comments within the narration. Like the bit in Ch. 2 where Dr. O'Shay was giving his diagnosis, and he was "warming up to the theory" as he was saying it. I found that a lot funnier than it really should be.

"Your world is wrong"... Is there a pattern behind the capitalization/bold/underline? Is there something to decode there, or is it just supposed to look weird?

Anyway, we've got a PLOT now, so I expect quick, frequent updates from here on out! Once every two years at least! ;)

On a related note, how is this story planned to be, anyway? Just something short, or something fairly significant? I'd prefer something short and sweet to a long story that never gets finished, so...yeah.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next! (HINT HINT)

Well this sounds like a nice story so far. I'm glad I only just discovered it, rather than have started reading it 5 years ago and forgot everything! I do like the image of Astro as a little kid with a handful of a sister! I think the way he is depicted in the 2003 series is perhaps the most endearing of the three incarnations.

Poor Astro DO MORE

DIS IS BOSS I love astro boy

Great job, the words to your story is interesting and detailed, keep that up, can't wait this to update

I love it!

Hey there. I'm back.
Is this fic ever going to be updated? I'm wondering whether I should remove it to make my story alert page a bit cleaner, but I still want to have faith.