short cute and funny , well written was easy to picture everything happeningand can't lie more like this would be definitely fun to read

good story, it had good character descriptions which matched with what i know from the anime

haha its nice

love it! Poor Hitsugaya XD mmhhh sweet Crack, It was wonderful! :)

Poor Toshiro and Hyorinmaru...This is so funny! XD

Lol! Very nice one-shot! I've always thought it funny that Kubo Tite basically created an invisible army of schizophrenics.. people no one can normally see who talk with and form relationships/bond with voices in their heads. This is the first time I've seen it mentioned in a fanfic though.

Love this! xD

Hahaha! This kept me laughing for a while. I wish there was more!

A cute and funny story! Great job! :)

LOLOLOL. I really wish I could laugh right now 'cause if I could I'd be laughing my ass of but I'm at school in the computer lab and thus cannot. Love the story though! XD

FAN!

Could you do a second chapter to this? I love the zanpakuto and it's just hilarious how they both instantly focused on Hyorinmaru then Shiro-chan.

Adored it! It's so Hitsugaya and Hyourimaru. xD "I think your zanpakuto is about to be gang raped!" Matsumoto... you're a bad influence on poor little Toshirou!

Where does crack come from? The Gutter. The same place were our minds were born and raised. XD Yea,not sure if you got that, but anyway. Funny stuff! Cractastic for sure!

SO CUUUTTTEEEE. I absolutely positively love Hyorinmaru! Haha. This made me smile. :)