Awesome. Love it. :)

hardly m-rated, but still very good. i like the poem. did you make it up?

I love it. You writing style seems to get into the nooks and crannies of their minds, facades based on reason but internal emotions battling for control. I'm not sure this merits an M, though. Perhaps a T would be more appropriate?

Holy manic! That was, that was, ok so my mind is at a total blank as to help articulate the awesomeness of this piece. And I'm not one to find myself speachless. ' So sweet! And hot and teasing and sexy and leaves me wanting more. . . ok so those are just a couple of things running through my head at once. I do hope you'll write more of these, or even add to this one. Again, love it! *Hugs* thank you for sharing this with us.

This is a really nice kiss, and the conversation leading up to it was very L and very Light.