That is creepy )

umm not as sad as expected...thats all

I love it! And I love creepy stories which makes me love it even more

Crazy Duncan FTW!

Not as creepy as I thought it would be, and a bit short, but pretty good. Very blunt, and to the point. I liek it, especially the way Duncan described what Gwen said. It seems liek something Duncan might do if he snapped, also. Love makes us do crazy things, after all. Well done. :3

~Ali

Yesh, kinda creepy xD

But oh so very good :3

Wow this is soo twisted!

But hey Thats Duncan!

Wow This is only a one shot!

AWHE :(

But Wow if you dont make a storie about this i want to !

Lol Cause this is such a great opening to a story!

Im madly in love with this work.

Love TwistedXmo

That was really good, creepy, crazy, and freaky...and escpecially good! I LOVE THAT SONG BTW! [{Duncan Will Win TDA! HE MUST!}] XD