The last dialogue stabbed me in my metallic heart. And the last line too.

I know you stated that you were tired and annoyed at the corrections that people keep sending you, your rant was truly enlightening, but I actually know where those descriptions come from, and here's a hint, it's not from the movie.
The Alex Rider series has a graphic novel adaptation. In which: Alex speaks Japanese, Yassen is a red head, and Jack is both blond and randomly makes sushi, all within the first two chapters of the very first book. I'll be the first to admit that the graphic novels are very different from the actual books, but I wouldn't be surprised if some people are completely unaware of these artistic differences. If it wasn't for the fact that I own a copy of both versions of Stormbreaker, I wouldn't be aware either.
Yes, getting corrections like that is extremely annoying, but your rant made it sound like you didn't even care why multiple people had told you the same thing. You are using the book universe, not the graphic novel universe, and not the movie universe, and that is perfectly acceptable and more than understandable. But please be aware that people judge you by your words, doubly so as a writer, and your rant before this chapter made you sound rude and a bit closed minded. While I'm sure that is not the case, please understand where I am coming from.
On a much different note, your story is very well written and an enjoyable read. I have issues finding good stories in the Alex Rider fan base and am glad to have stumbled across yours. I hope you continue to evolve and improve as a writer as time goes on.

Hey, I really like your FF until the part I've read. The idea of having at the beginning of each chapter this flashbacks (or what it is) is interesting to read. I also kind of like Yuri although I'm not sure whether he's pronounced Yuri or Yüri... Well, I kind of got used to call him Yüri, no matter what... Okay, the whole thing I wanted to tell you, is that I appreciate your story. Liebe Grüße from Germany :D

I'm usually not into slash...but damn! That was so well written! Who wouldn't like it?

Well written chapter

Loving this story so far! Well written.

Ben narrowed his eyes. "That still doesn't explain why you're here now," he said, coldly.

Alex bit his lip and glanced at Wolf.

Ben's jaw tensed in anger and he rounded on his friend.

"He's sixteen," snarled the agent. "He's sixteen and you're screwing him! That's- that's sick, not to mention illegal."

"Oh shut the fuck up, Ben," snarled Alex. "He's hardly the first man I've slept with. And anyway, I initiated it, not him."

Ben looked a bit taken aback. "But-" he tried.

"No," spat Alex, angrily. "You accept that I'm mature enough to be a spy. You can't say that I can do that but can't choose my own lovers."

This part is absolutely wonderfull! Like, 10/10 wow

okay it was good am I late for any reviews?

I realize that this story is over (i think, I'm not done reading it yet), but I have some suggestions for future writing. I personally think that all the sex is a bit overkill and takes away form the story. Most Alex rider fans are into action and adventure, right? And I feel like all the lusty stuff is taking away from that. I'm not very far into this story so who knows, maybe it gets better, but for now I feel like you should keep the romance to a bare minimum unless the story is about romance. In that case, it should be about love, not lust and sex. Besides, you'll appeal to more audiences by taking out that stuff and gain more readers. Sorry if I offended, my intent was to give constructive criticism.

love it

I reckon that it's a ghost hunting kit in the bag or possibly a book on how to look after a vampire

I have yet to review on anything ive read thus far. But, you are appreciated dear miss. Ive been reading your story all day and am thoroughly excited to continue. Thank you

does Greg have PTSD and/or a form of amnesia? either way it's a really good story.

Is it wrong that I hate Blunt more than any antagonist in the Alex rider series?

This was awesome! I'm gonna go find the second part right now! Keep writing! You're amazing!