| Reviews for Dark Side Of The Sun |
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Dude.cx chapter 1 . 12/18/2015 This is pretty funny. Stupid bitch Bella always has to butt in. |
YAOI-CREAPER chapter 7 . 3/12/2015 SOOOOOOORRY... But a compromise, really? If it were me I would never want my love to be kissing someone else while they were with me. Honestly, I don't like Bella very much, and I tend to bash her a lot. Ed and Seth are cute together and having him have to SHARE with the human is annoying. I wish it was just them together and Bella was out of the picture, but you didn't write it that way. Kinda makes me a bit upset that it ended with Bella and Edward kissing. I was angry at that point. Just pick one! Jeez...* sighs* but other than that ordeal, it was a great story and you wrote it fairly well and I'm impressed. So, keep doing more stories! ;) |
darklightangel64 chapter 7 . 10/11/2013 Somehow it feels that both Bella and Seth got screwed on this deal. Edward is the only one who get all the benefits and none of the heartbreak...I want to be Ed. |
WingedDemonWolfGirl chapter 7 . 5/27/2013 I think the ending was abrupt but apart from that it was a good story :) |
gossipblondie chapter 7 . 9/6/2012 Well, the story is good and very realistic. But i don't like whinny bella so that compromise part i don't like. I'm okay with sharing and all that but is seems a bit unfair that she doesn't want them to kiss or hold hands in front of her whilr she can. If she accepted it, she should accept it fully, at least after some time. But, that's just my opinion. Anyways it is good. Blondie xo |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012 wanted edward to be stolen away( |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/22/2012 I don't understand why there is a sharing policy. Imprinting is supposed to be the most intense emotional and physical connection of all for a shifter. So I don't see Seth being able to bear not fully having his love. It seems like there would be more possessive feelings too. And Bella is fucking nuts. What the hell is her deal? I was hoping that she would just fade out and get with Mike or one of the other Forks humans. |
seyda chapter 7 . 2/16/2012 WHYYYY CAN'T SHE DIE! |
ej-83 chapter 7 . 10/7/2011 Nice..but for how long will dat peace ends coz from da looks of it bella won't b playing nice at all.. |
ShantelCall26 chapter 4 . 7/3/2011 BELLA YOU STUPID... BUM, TRASHY UGLY MEAN... THING UGHHHHH! Love the story so far tho I just have a rob with Bella / |
DreamingOfASoullessIan chapter 7 . 6/26/2011 I really liked your story up until chapter six. I mean sharing really? Does Seth or Bella have any self respect what so ever? Bella was way to annoying but then again she's always like that.. I love chapters one through five! Keep Writing Jamie |
OfAGroovyMind chapter 7 . 6/16/2011 Ahhhh this is an interesting way to end love relationships...:3 I did enjoy this story a lot and I do prefer Seth over Bella for Edward...haha Also love the ending...pure cuteness and funniness with Seth and the pack...put a smile right on my face:) And glad that Edward returned Seth's feelings...you got my heart skipping in so many parts of the story I was ready to throw the computer screen out the window...I'm glad I didn't...this story was too damn good to take my eyes off...:) I do hope to see another Sethward story from you some day and one that will only end with those two and no third wheel Bella...Oh well still cute...what else can I say but...this: - Edward/Seth - |
LuvleeLyfe chapter 7 . 6/13/2011 ok i just read this in like 30 minutes hahaha but i loved it, i loved the struggle the compromise was...weird... but i like what u did with it. lol good job! im sad u ended it the way u did. i would have liked more of everything overall. consider a continuation... just saying. :-) |
j5girl31012 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011 Oohhhh I cant wait to read this story! It seems interesting and amazing. Ill update on every chapter that stands out the most and pour all my feelings out(: I cant wait to enjoy this story! |
The Dark Lady Voldemort666 chapter 7 . 3/8/2011 It was good until the last chapter. Bella and Edward are both stupid. I dont like how Bella is so much of a cry baby. She makes me sick. Seth is so much better for Edward then Bella. |