"For you, for this, my name is Patrick."

that is good, so hot

Woow ! Very well written (even if I'm not a specialist because I'm French) ! I loved it ! Bravo ! ;) I just want to say that it's too bad there is only two chapters...

Well-written! Good job. I liked this.

That is so, so incrediby sweet!

Whe... lucky Lisbon.

I don't usually give feedback but that was good : Jane was annoying as always.

SO hot and wild. I can just picture Jane doing something like this. Let's face it who would have enough will power to turn him down? I loved the JIBSON heat in your story. Very well written and full of passion.

I loved it!

is so sweet and sexy!

Cute! reaally cute! i loved it! XD

Really liked that chapter ! I love the way you describe the actions and emotions that pass between them, it's really captivating. Jane is so cute when he is nervous ! More soon please ;)

~WL

oh for goodness Sake u can't just leave thAT THERE!

very lovely and HOT story .. and great dialogues .. absolutely loved it .. Lisbon's frustration is SO understandable.. how could they waited for A WEEK? with a passion like that I wonder if they made it through the day without going back again pressed against a wall *giggle*

at the end, great one and forgive me that I didn't review the first chapter as I was in a hurry to read the end _

hope you write more for Jane/Lisbon ..

I'm torn . . . I really, really want more, but I think it leaves off at a beautiful spot, too . . . gah, wonderful job! I'd let Patrick Jane push me up against a wall any day.

MORE PLEASE!:) It was very good!3 I am huge Jisbon fan

Very fluffy. I like it. Will there be a second chapter?