Aww, that's a cute story! Bringing some light mood in this relationship :) love it!

That was totally cute! The characters were perfect and I LOVED the whole masochist (can't spell xD) and pervert thing...Soubi really is! And I love the last line because it shows that Ritsuka really does like Soubi 3

Perfection!

Soubi Soubi Soubi, you have no clue what you have done... than again... I think Soubi would like the idea of Ritsuka being around him so often XD.

SE-QUEL!SE-QUEL!SE-QUEL! Though, I don't know how you may do that... Ah well, good job anyway!

I love it. I can picture Ritsuka and Soubi doing this and it made me giggle. Great job :)

sweet!both are acting like little kids at different times!keep up the stories!

cute story! Are you going to write more? Hope you do, I'd love to read more of it!

Ahaha! I really wanna know what happens next! Even if he can't smoke, I don't think Soubi would mind if Ritsuka was around him all the time. ;)

that was good

““Well, then I’ll just have to make a point of never leaving you alone.”

ritsuka you are one smart cat

Whoaa, loved it. Heheheehe. I laughed. It was funny-Soubi is so adamant, I see. Ritsuka seems like a little kid, hahaa, but I dont think he'd care that much that he'd steal it. But he could. I dunno. WRITE MOARR! I loved it when Soubi said, "I cant stand five." or something, lool 3

Soubi, you just walked right into that, Ritsuka you are a genius!*laughs*