contieu this plise

I really liked in. It is real sweet and touching. BRAVO, LAD! I want this badly to go no! Good Clopin and Esmeralda stories are hard to find.

This was awesome! I enjoyed reading it immensely and I loved the fact that you give us a glimpse as to how Esmerelda and Clopin might have met and how each of them assumed the roles they had in the film. As for Clopin's lines, I thought they were fitting and really well presented. I could easily imagine him saying them, so I wouldn't worry about them. :) I hope you can continue with this, or at least with another fic. I enjoyed this so much, I wish there was more!

I loved this. Thanks so much for sharing!

I do love it. It's absolutely AMAZING. :)

I found it lovely. I love how she doesn't understand where she stands in society, but she understands how the world will view it, and she refrains from belonging to that world as long as she can. That is, before realizing they aren't horrid people.

-PE

Au contraire, I found "Only the best toys for you now." to be one of my favorite lines in this. You've done very well capturing the essence of a child's thought process in Esmeralda, and Clopin seems plenty in-character to me. All-around adorable one-shot.

I think you're too harsh on yourself! Who says Clopin can't have layers? And besides, the man is flamboyant to the EXTREME; I think most of the things he says is just because they sound good, so the lameness of that "only the best toys for you" line is totally understood. From what I could tell, Clopin is performing with everything he says and does, so there's nothing OOC with him sounding a little scripted, like he's considering how good he sounds as much as what he says. But then again, it's almost 2 in the morning and I am insane, so this might not make much sense. It's a wonderful story nonetheless.

Don't worry about his lines, Clopin is the kinda guy who would speak as if he was singing all day long.

You have a beautiful writing style, and this should definatly be continued. (Have you considered writing an orignal novel? I think you'd be quite good.)

Really good story!

I lov this fic!

its perfect, just what i need X3

(sorry my ingles is bad)

jeje

beutiful, pliz make more!

pliz

i cant life if i dont read about my Cleopin!

Well, I just wanted to say thank you for writing a fanfic that actually portrays these two in the most accurate sense possible while still maintaining a sense of originality. It's very impressive, how you introduced them to each other without making it sappy and campy. I think they are both very well in character, and I love the instant relationship they form with a short meeting.

By the way, I understand how hard it is to write speaking lines for characters that seem to spend the entire movie singing their lines, but you did a fabulous job anyways. :)

I have nothing to critique, since this is a wonderful one shot, if that is what you intend it to be.

Continue with the awesome work! :D