Hi..
Sorry if this seems rude but i think there is a mistake in this chapter isnt Renee dead.. didnt she die because of a drunk driver.. so why would charlie call her?
Thanks for the great story other wise!
Rocheyxen xx

I am going to vomit! Bella was a fucking nieve dumbass who should have left James the first time he RAPED her. His ending was way too easy and what you did to bella would cause INFERTILITY you sicko! Not only that but there is NO WAY in hell a woman who went through what she did could EVER have a normal relationship. She needs SERIOUS therapy before she should even think about getting into another relationship. Not only that but I don't htink I could classify your bella as "smart" either. You would think being the daughter of a police chief she would know better. Not only that but James forcing Edward to watch while he raped her? SICK twisted and disgusting. *goes and vomits in the toilet and garggle some mouth wash*

i noticed that in the last chapter, how could she have walked all the way to the car, she just had big surgery on her leg and spleen, and now she nearly run to esme? she has a broken femur, she wouldnt be able to walk anywhere for a while. she would need a special seat on the plane and in the car sit in the back, b/c her cast would be all the way down to her ankle. so chance of bending her leg.

thankyou

I just read your story today and is was a good read.

It is always a hard type of story to write - this was good.

thanks - look forward to your other stories

I thought that Bella's mother was dead, but in this chapter when Edward called Charlie, Charlie said that he was going to call Renee. Is Renee a different character in this story?

aaawwww that is soo sweet! i'm very glad they got their happy ending. after all they've been through and they still came out strong as ever. i really do hope fairy tale endings exist, what do you think? x

Okay, so I really like this story. One thing, ((i know it's complete but)) you kinda messed up by saying he'll call renee, because you said Bella's mom is dead, unless you made it where Renee is her dad's new wife? (I might've missed some part saying something about that)

great job though.

omg i luved it u r amazing

I loved it! Short, angsty, sweet and straight to the point. Though I thought that Renee died; when Edward called charlie to let him know that bella was kidnapped Charlie said i'll let renee know. m Anyways loved it!

Read the whole story...LOVED it

Glad they finally got there HEA good way to end it.

James was such a sucker to actually fall for that one last kiss before I go yeah big sucker indeed

Poor Edward having to watch that and think she likes it god I would love to slap James and more

Im abit confused how as he got all her clothes aswell? Thought Renee was dead maybe that was just a slip when Charlie said he was going to let her know

Cant believe that she as had to put up with that shit hope Edward can help her heel