very well thought out back story, and i am sure that your original version would also be absolutely fascinating. please wright the original version.

What about Rosanna/Flip-Sides?

Awsome...but thw war that killed thousandands of billions died cause the council of aftholes couldnt take an opinion and I think his story is a little more complicated then turning evil do to a mear unfairness and I think the autobot alliance would not be formed til after the fall 8f the cybertronian empire to the decepticon empire

I am lovin this story! Do you think you could do knockout?

Such an amazing stories, I can't call them a set since they flow so beautifully. I really hope you update this! And if you need a bot, how about Red Alert?

a very intersting chapter

Dun Dun Dun! Constructicons!

Wooh! Go Optimus!

It makes so much sense that they didn't start out like they did in any of the cartoons.

M...how about Sunstorm, the Triplechangers, and Blaster and his Cassettes, please?

I'm really glad you're doing Mirage next. Could you also do Cliffjumper as well before you wrap up?

I'm really enjoying these. How about Astrotrain and Blitzwing? Or the coneheads?

I lol'd XD

It's just so perfectly like them to be a bunch of lazy aft opportunists like that. :D

SO awesome. But I STILL haven't seen Optimus Prime! Where is he? Please do a chappy on him soon! Thank you!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FIC! It's FANTASITC!

PS: And I love Megatron's appearences. You've got his character spot-on! ;-)

I love your story! But WHERE IS OPTIMUS? I am dying to know! Your writing is spectacular by the way! Sometimes you use a few too many adjectives, but I love it none-the-less! Remember to avoid word repetition too often too. And you like using "yeah,yeah, great" as a speaking phrase too often.

Sorry for the criticisms, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FIC! I hope I see Optimus later on! ;-)