hope you update soon

HOLY F-! I haven't read this in years... and I still love it. It's just really nostalgic. I loved it then and I still love it now. The writing style changed a bit but, that's expected as people get older and they themselves change. I never thought I would know the ending or really any thing else about how the story went. I'm very excited.

Let me start off by saying I'm not really one to review because I find it hard to talk to people that I don't know very well. That being said, thank you for continuing this story! I have followed it since you started it in 2009 and had a long hiatus in 2013 when I started becoming more involved in different fandoms. With the quarantine I started reading the manga again and it immediately made me want to read this story again. Let me tell you how excited I was to see it was updated recently. I read it in just a few days and I love to see how your writing style has changed and refined. I want to say you are awesome for letting me fulfill me need for fan fiction!

oooh, I'm happy to see an update from one of the few red river fanfics i check up on! the teasing interaction between ramses and kiara had me chuckling. i'm looking forward to reading the ending you have planned!

Awesome job! It's good to see you again

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NO MORE CHAPTERS?! I can't even begin to tell you how much I LOVED your story! First of all, Red River or "Anatolia Story", was the first manga I ever picked up as a child. Second, I just binged read this whole thing for DAYS and HOURS nonstop and now I feel this vast emptiness with my life. I'm sorry I didn't review on any other chapters but between work and taking every moment to read this (and the fact that you wrote those chapters already felt it would really make a difference) I didn't really find the time. But I must let you know that I will be very hopeful that you will continue this amazing and crazy well written story! Ramses and Kiara never even got to do the awesome adult stuff most know we all want to see! I just can't get enough of Kiara's amazing personality! Thank you so freakin much for sharing your absolutely fabulous magical brain juices with your lovely FF readers! (Especially those of us from the South! ;D)

I am just curious, but do you plan to return to this story and update it? If not, its perfectly understandable. I really enjoyed reading this story and it has inspired me to write my own red river fanfiction sometime soon. Your story has gotten a lot of wonderful reviews, and I would really hate to see it fall into the abandoned stories on fanfiction. Could you leave us with an author notice telling us what you will plan to do, please?
Hoping to hear news of this story soon. :)

This is an amazing story! Please don't give up on it. Update! :)

please continue
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You started off pretty well with this story, but now it feels like you just don't care about it anymore which kind of sucks. Ramses is a total asshole and Kiara suddenly got extremely annoying. I kept cringing reading this because of their personalities. The whole thing went downhill when Kiara went to Egypt and now I'm just disappointed that after 150k words their relationship hasn't improved at all and Kiara seems to be downgrading as a character. If you ever come back to this you might want to think about picking up the pace plotwise and adding some character growth. It would be awesome to see Kiara lose some of her innocence and act more like a hardened soldier. And maybe make Ramses nicer and less of a dick.

It was amusing at first but now Ramses is just being a dick. Don't see how you're going to get them together. So far the only 'good' thing about him is that he is hot.

Please update.
I am so in love with story.3

Hi! I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story. It was one of the first fanfictions I had ever read. I loved it then and I love it now! You are a fantastic writer. Keep up the great work! :)

God I love this story but it's soooo slow! I mean I feel like their relationship didn't improve almost at all! I mean not even a small kiss and we're on 54 chapter haha Whenever she thinks there can be something more she quickly changes her mind... I mean we're talking about Ramses who is a big pervert lol I think he at least would try to kiss her if he found out that it would piss her off a lot :) The only thing I don't like (not counting the pace this story os going with) is that Ramses still thinks so low of her. After what she did and how she did it I thought he will realise her worth. After all with Yuri he realised it fast so I'm surprised it takes him so long with Kiara. Especially that now he found out that she mostly acts abd hardly show hers real skills. Anyway hope I didn't offend you and hope you'll update soon! Can't wait to see next chapter! Hopefully there will be more romance soon! :)