lol

gods you are hilarious

i loved this, so unique! i think you should continue it, maybe with some sibling time? cause i mean, if youve read toa i think we all agree that we NEED sibling time!

I must say that this was amazing to read. Grammar was so beautiful I wanted to cry with how hard to find that. Pair it with how close you kept to Apollos and Artemis's personalities and it was one of the most amazing works in this fandom. The ending (and whole thing overall) was hilarious! Now I just must be careful with my fabrication, don't want an angry Apollo after Me! ;)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh that was great.

Great! But plz dial down the laungue

As I am following your request to review. I enjoyed the ending of your story as it implies that apollo , in a fit of annoyance threw out his computer. However, I find it unassuming that your fan fiction is about the annoyance of foods at having fiction rewritten about themselves.

That was really interesting. Thank you very much for sharing it with the Internet, we're really thankful!

Have a lovely day!

'At least I've gotten laid before.'

I swear, this was one of the best parodies I've ever read (that isn't a commentary). You got the exact amount of satire and seriousness (is that a word? Yeah, it's a word) right-making fun out of rubbish fanfiction writers whilst making us laugh. There were a few minor grammatical errors (and when I say minor, I do mean minor) but overall, a great story. I know that some people critiqued you for putting the 'motherfucker' line in there, but it's rated T, for goodness sake. There was bound to be something that made it a T. I loved the plotline (especially the ending!), and this was a great fanfiction over all.

Praise from ye olde England,
Lily

PS: Percabeth is now a thing, but since you wrote this before it was made canon officially, that can be excused.

And to add on- realized you can only post one review per chapter-:
It's sad that some stories with a while lot more drama and romance-but makes me roll my eyes-is better liked than other, better stories(Just my personal opinion-take all this with a pinch of salt).

Hilarious! :)

I sincerely hope that first passage was not excerpted from an actual, published story... That would be depressing. I pity Apollo. Wouldn't it be easier to simply pull a few strings and shut down the website, though?

Lol interesting poor Apollo my Sunshine

Please update

Nice, humouring cool

this is really funny