You can go further with this, why not give it a try?
I hope to read the next chapter soon!
Make it like the next episode in season for but with your own twist.
Good luck on writing the next chapter! :)

oh man this could have been turned into an epic fic! :) wish you cont. rather then one-shot!

Delightful tale. Well done.

ok that is really good

Beautiful. So Incredibly Beautiful.

You are one exceptionally gifted writer. Love your other FanFics too. But this one was so so beautiful. Most especially the final part. It fits right in with the niches of L&C.

This is, without a shadow of a doubt, one of my favourite FanFics.

Keep up the the good work.

loved it:) wish there was more

long live clois

jess

Loved this line...

She’d never tell anyone this, but Clark Kent was the first boy to ever give her flowers. And she was going to keep it forever.

sigh... I'm going to miss Smallville for two months... Thanks there are fanfics to read like this one..._

That was a very cute story. You did a good job merging Lois into the episode Transference. I also liked the story after the official episode ended. If anything I wish there was more...

good story