Why don't you write this anymore? It's great you should go on!

I love the plot you have going but I have to tell you, it's a little hard to follow the story. You jump from one person's thoughts to another so quickly and without warning. I often get confused as to who I am reading and it takes me rereading it several times to figure out. Perhaps you could put EPOV- for Eric's point of view before you start his train of thought.

I quite like the mix of POV with tv show narration :) . Good chapter and long length of it makes it even better!

Awesome Story! Can't wait for more!

Wow, what a wild ride. I feel like I've had 20 cups of coffee (not decaf), painted my toenails pink (not inhaling the polish-of course) while on a crazy, twisty, roller-coster!(and I LIKE IT) ~crap~ I need more! Looking forward to your next brilliant chapter!

I love reading your story. You make my day with your humour and your take on Eric. Update soon!

I am so thouroughly enjoying this story! There's tension! There's drama! And it's funny as heck! Can't wait for more. Thanks so much!

GREAT chapter - thank you! I especially enjoyed the humor in this one - way to go!

This is your best chapter yet. It's funny, but you know, us LAers actually feel that way about MS - oddly and absurdly smug and superior. I think it's because we switch off being at the bottom of lists with MS. :-)

I really liked the PsOV woven together. I think it worked out quite well.

Keep it going!

*woof*

I love the humour in your story, and I enjoy reading their thoughts. I look forward to more.

I didn't find it confusing at all, it made me laugh all the way through. Sookie needs to get over her enthrallment of Bill and turn her attention to the big Viking who thinks you make a fire with 6 logs of wood. I love reading their POV's it's hilarious, I thought Eric had a hard time with his attention span, Sookie's train of thought goes off rail just as much, only her body usually follows it and she ends up less than graceful, lol. Loved the too scared to pee. I can't wait for your next chapter dogfriend, and when they come out this good you can blame me anytime you want.

Dogfriend this is pure genius. I am reading these chapters slowly so I don't miss anything. Your sense of humor is tremendous, wicked and sly. I love how you work in references to other events, like the "keeps sketchier records than a Texas nudist colony". I can't believe how much fun I'm having reading what you write. I love your Eric, I love your Pam. Thank you.

Just delicious and true to how I imagine the flamboyant Lalalafayette would think and act. You must be like a chameleon to be able to take on the personality of the different characters the way you do. Beautiful!

Oh, you're such a tease! :-) Then again, the dream with Sookie and Eric was extrememly hot in S2, so why not continue that little trend? I like that it was Eric dreaming it, and not Sookie this time.

Pam, as always, even when she's just texting, is awesome. I love how you're writing her.

Another great chapter! Well done, you.

*woof*

Eric is a hoot, so nervous. He certainly does have vivid fantasies even when he's awake. I don't think Pam has to worry too much about her fingers, he'll forget he was annoyed with her long before he gets back to Fangtasia, he doesn't seem to have much of an attention span anymore. I'm loving this story, it keeps making me laugh with what these two are thinking. Great job, can't wait until you post the next chapter.