Reviews for Incomplete |
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Cina's chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 Oh man was he or wasn't he guilty. |
magmom4 chapter 1 . 6/6/2016 I think if he did it there was a good reason but I am thinking no, |
tulleofdec20th chapter 1 . 4/22/2015 Wow! This was definitely different from what I was expecting and yet so beutifully written. I adore it! |
ashes at midnight chapter 1 . 4/21/2015 I think most people regret the things theg have done when faced with death, and accepting that is a part of moving on. So i think he probably did. But he's probably spent so long in prision, inside his own head that he's convinced himself he hasnt in order to be forgive in himself and god. I enjoyed the way you wrote it, i loved the detail and plot, though you still couldnt get Bella to be interesting to me. She's a lost cause. ;) xx |
nathy.faithy chapter 1 . 4/20/2015 Oh man. I cried a bit here and there. It's been so long since I read Bellard (I really can't remember the ship name) and this kind of hurt. I think he did it. I think he had to kill the person or someone else he loved and cared about would have died. But at the same time I think he didn't. That he was wrongly accused and Bella felt compassion towards him. I really enjoyed the reading, great job! |
Little-Angry-Kitten chapter 1 . 4/20/2015 Okay you just killed me! You just fucking killed me, Tiff! I'm dead inside! Like... I can't even... :'( :'( :'( |
lissy2110 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 Hey, a really sad oneshot. I guess he said that he did not do it. All the best for the new year. Lissy |
kingunder221b chapter 1 . 12/22/2012 O-M-G, I am really at loss for words right now. I did need tissues, quite many. It's really a beautiful story, even tough the end, but geesh, i really really fell in love with this. It is written so beautifully, and it's such a strong story. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G, that's all I have to say. Yes, I think he did it, even when my heart and brain screams, "NO, HE DIDN'T!", but I think he did. Anyway, you have done a magical and beautiful job, love to you. |
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 9/4/2012 Dang...this is a two-tissue story. And as compassionate people I think most would want to believe he did not bludgeon the person. He was such a gentle and kind person so it would be hard to think he did it. |
2Teelolz chapter 1 . 1/19/2012 Ooo I had a feeling you wouldn't tell us the answer. :( The emotions in this story were spot on. Amazing! I think, yes he did it though...because really, why on earth would she want to know that he was innocent knowing that he was about to be killed. Its better to know that he is being punished for a crime he committed. Plus you said that it would have broken her if he were wrongfully accused, I doubt her reaction to a 'no' would have been a single tear. Would you let me know if I'm right or not? Please! x |
Bitches-Love-Canons chapter 1 . 1/16/2012 please continue it! it made me cry...please, add more! |
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 Wow, pretty serious topic. It s so overwhelming. Thank u for sharing. Just wonder could you really be sentenced to death for one murder? Bises |
Gillian Aubrey chapter 1 . 8/11/2011 That was so sad! I think he didn't do it, did he? Thanks for sharing the story! |
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011 I think I don't know but I loved it thank you |
CaptainNapkin chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 This is an awesome, inspiring story |