This was awesome. I actually felt the cold

Love it... the faith, I just... I converte to the will of fire and Konoha
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A very nicely done civilian perspective. I'm always delighted to find a non-Mary-Sue civilian fic. Thank you.

Gem! Absolute gem! I loved this story very much!

wow that was extreamly good im sad it was so short

Poor Hayate :( still going on a mission even though he's really sick

Awesome. :D

WHY ARE ALL YOUR FICS SO EMOTIONALLY TOUCHING! sniff.

You're probably aware that I'm strolling through your stories by now. You're consistently awesome, so I'm going to favourite you too. XD

This was a great story. I had so much fun reading it and thought it was very creative how you put it through the eyes of a civillian guide. There were a couple of minor errors, like at one point there was a quotation mark where there shouldn't have been, but nothing that actually impacted the story. You kept the characters with their personalities, which was quite impressive. After reading the first chapter I was worried this was going to be a little short, but by the end I didn't feel shorted at all. Go will of fire!

This is such a lovely price of writing thankyou

a very heart-warming story :'3

thank you so much for this lovely fic :3

That's sweet. :) I should write more, but I don't know what. So I'll just stick with saying that this brightened my day.

Wow. This is the first Iruka, Izumo, Kotetsu and Hayate story I have ever read. I'm suprised and I think Riku is a very interesting person. What a great way to intergrate these characters and, in only two chapters, make Riku appear as a non-random character.

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I cried. )