What a great, creepy, start to a story. Really well written. I like how the tension kept creeping up by notches until the very end, how Dan ever so slowly lost control of his life. Very good.

This is fabulous. When I tiptoed over to this section on FF, I wasn't sure what I would find, but this is most definitely what I was hoping to see. Marvelous work, truly.

So cute. I love how unjudgmental they are.

NICE...

Having read chapters 1-3 and knowing the subtlety of theses, I combed through this meticulously. Takeing nearly an hour to read this...

I still think Im missing something. Will think on it and read it again later.

The crypticness is part of the appeal... there's alot unwritten... but Im still unsure what that is.

Had to read this again. So very subtle.

Was more careful to distinguish and delineate where Dan ended.

Very very nice.

This is amazing... in the midst of all those Rorschach haunts Dan fic's this one is by far the most compelling and realistic.

In that Rorschach will no lose sight of his mission. He and Dan arent really the chummy friends that everyone makes them out to be (supported by the ending.)

This is ending that feels the most right. In that Dan doesn't care, and Rorschach's urgency and purpose so great he will stop at nothing. And in what little way, he still cares to leave enough change.

Very Very good story.

The appropriate subtlety and reveal.