Are you ever going to finish this because this shit is golden

A writer whit a lack of completion is not a good writer. I guess he too busy hanging out at space battle sucking up to all the shinji fans so they can read his crappy fics that he don't care about his un-finish fics. This guy has around 8 or 9 un-finish eva fics. What good writer does that? He don't care about leaving his fans hanging, then again it don't help that his fans don't tell him the truth about his poor writing skills cause they too busy kissing his ass so I don't fell bad his fans either. His stories are the same shit over and over again, he too lazy to be creative and too scare to think outside the box. Just as long shinji is a straight guy who don't have romantic feelings for boys, all the girls in eva want to fuck him even the ones who don't like him while ignoring all the male characters or in the case of kensuke making him look stupid, idiot eva fans will think his fics are the best ever. How sad.

Why did I guess right?

Rei is objectively more of a sociopath than Asuka.

This is bad.

So goooooood. You gotta continue this!

HOLY S_
THIS IS REALLY GOOD

You know, I was enjoying your story a lot. And I mean A LOT. IMO, it is better than Nobody Dies.

And then you stopped to update and started a rewrite. A rewrite that has not been updated in over four years.

You have great ideas and a very distinctive writing style, but most of your fics die ignominiously after a few chapters. It is heart-breaking checking your profile and seeing so many excellent or potentially great stories with no conclusion.

Sigh. At least this chapter is a good ending point (unlike the chapter six of the rewrite), since many important subplots have been resolved. Shinji and Asuka have resolved many of their troubles with their parents and are together, Ariel's origins have been revealed... unfortunately we will never know what Gendo was plotting.

I concur with the reviewer below me: if you have one fault in your stories, it is a lack of completion.

I you have one fault in all you myriad writings, it is one thing, and one thing alone: a lack of completion.

shinj got lot of nerve talking about someone when he the most mess up person in eva. compare to him and his dad, red eyes is more human then the both of them. funny how he see rei as a sister when he never saw her that way even after finding out the truth of her origin. the fact he could not move on from asuka or rei is one the big problems whit him in the main series. of course they have no problem moving on from him and who can blame them. nobody wants to be with a psycho.

fanfics turn all that around, making all that look like a good thing. nothing like the power of fanfics to spread lies.

I always love your versions of Gendo. He goes from evil manipulative bastard to truly Magnificent Bastard. And I LOVE it. Dumbledore wishes he was like your Gendo.

Thank you so much for resolving that before you stupid updating this. Awesome story.

That would have made a good ending point for this fic, in my opinion... except of course for Leliel.

Having read "Nobody Dies" before this one, that "I AM" gave me shivers.

If this isn't the end PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story.
I beg you!

Damn this story is so good! I hope it is completed!