I enjoyed this thanks.

I enjoyed this thanks.

I endured as much as I can but I'll stop reading beside the too big exaggerations of titles , politics , illogical reports ( what does the fact that the grandchildren of General Hammond are "spoiled rotten" have to do with the report ) , the title "Sir" is only for knights and one can only become knight by the Queen's decree , in the announcement I think only relevant titles are called a daughter or scion of a house may be just called that , they're not lord or lady ( and "Lord Moony" , especially in a formal event is disrespectful to both host and guest ) not to mention that Remus Lupin do not have any title anyway , the fact that Tonks is daughter of house black do not give him any titles either , I do not see how Ron Weasley would be Lord Pendragon in blood soul and magic , since one in blood other weasleys will have precedence , from a hero story stand point giving Ron a higher title than harry is not an option , not to mention that the pendragon line is a royal line , and the monarchy for both magicals and mundane is the Queen Elizabeth , not to mention I don't see where ronald wealsey's soul is "pure" enough ( after the jealousy and all ) to have such title and finaly you can't just make the titles appear into existence and make people already titled and announced to a formal event with said title without having already spoken of said title and it's introduction , you can't just spring suddenly a recent past event that should exist within the timeline of the story as if it's none important .the intervention of the queen is good but it needs more development ( like by what power the queen can lock down the ministry , a magical contract perhaps or house Windsor is a cadet branche of house pendragon , making the Queen a squib rather than mundane ) , I don't see how Saddam Hussein being squib is relevant to the story either ! you also gave no detailed or general introduction of the information that harry received and just spring information as needed in the story ( making him nearly an all knowing god ! if that's the case why don't you just have him all knowing of how to kill Voldemort in two seconds and end all this charade in one chapter and end the story ! while Voldemort can be just a minor debacle in the great scheme of things ( with the fate of the galaxy being the focus of the plot ) you can't have the balance between the characters on different sides so different , the beginning of the story is good but the goa'uld/Voldemort plot as well as harry's character development as well as those who are around is of need of major improvement and there are junk information either not needed or should be put elsewhere ( inappropriate for formal or serious conversation but can be added later as a joke for example )

you err in the story about humans having 32 chromosomes. humans have 46 chromosomes with 23 inherited from each mother and father.

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

:-)

harry est euh.. super! un peu trop quand même.

Ugh the sparkles on this story are too much, I've tried to suspend my disbelief a bit but I cant get over how hammy this story is, everyone believes everyone, there's no reactions to all the crazy crap going on, Harry wouldn't just immediately understand and accept the memories, powers and the ungodly amount of money he obtained, and the sheer amount of wealth and power he;s obtained is highly unrealistic as well. I'm sorry, this seemed like a good story at first but its been Mary Sued all to hell.

did you take in to account that the Potter accounts lose more then they bring in and the Black real estate costs more to fix each year then it brings in? considering the goblins get paid to manage the accounts they are doing a shitty job of it.

Dear Phantom1s

I have enjoyed your story about a Harry potter/Stargatre SG1 Crossover.

However. There is a point in this chapter that I think that should be adressed.

When they are talking about Saddam Hussein they are stating that a fetus is made up of 32 is not right.

A single human cell is made up of 46 chomosomes, 23 from the father and 23 from the mother.

For a fetus is this the same.

Other than that. Amazing story.

Normandy Copmmander (NC)

Pretty good work, just a few spelling errors, such as 'thru' is actually spelled 'through'. Definitely worth a read though!

I'm glad the big guns will help harry america will always be stronger then other country

good chapter I worder how tom is doing after losing both of his whores

good chapter

good chapter man I'm su dumped not tryin g to read this after finishing be prepare