I was hoping they would just toss the egg lmao

...Bill is Indiana Jones? Lol, and also WTF. This is a take on his character I've yet to see.

How to fix this story (other than a rewrite):

1) Take out everything after Bill abducts Harry. Replace it with Charlie convincing Bill that they have no authority to bring Harry back. They must leave Harry, take Fluer and her egg and go back to Dumbledore. Dumbledore will know what to do.

2) Dumbledore is worried about bringing Harry back for fear of him being thrown in prison. He puts Minerva in charge. He then takes Remus and Serius. Maybe he takes Charlie but not Bill.

3) With the help of Remus's werewolf attributes they locate the entrence to Harry's world. They find their way in.

4) What if any government has jurisdiction in the world beneath? They decide to talk to Harry. With point me spells Dumbledore locates Harry. He is still with Allie and her Hatchlings. The hatchlings have grown some.

5) Harry was seven when he fled so surely he knows how to talk. I cannot believe he would have forgotten. Harry, Dumbledore, Remus and Sirius have a long talk. They will visit him again but let him stay in the jungle.

6) Remus is concerned for the world beneath. If it's existence is made known poachers will flood it killing the dinosaurs and entirely wrecking the ecosystem. Dumbledore agrees. They make their way back. The world beneath will remain a secret.

7) Perhaps Bill gets wealthy with his sunstones perhaps not. He is a possible threat to return to the land for more sunstones and/or to endanger Harry.

etc. , etc.

It is unfortunate you were plagued by so many negative reviews. I'm rather appalled at that. I have only read one chapter of your rewrite so I can't judge until I read more.

Would I be correct is assuming that you are telling of a "lost world" a place where dinosaurs survive.

I believe its existence must be kept secret lest human poachers destroy it.

Are dinosaurs living in the wizarding world?

I've thought of this as a scenario: The forbidden forest is actually a very large place made Uplottable by wizards of the past because of fierce magical wars having tainted the land. This land once contained Camelot and other cities of folklore but the ancient wars destroyed them. A number of survivers escaped but their memory of where they'd come from was lost in a few generations. Hagrid only knows about an eighth of the Forbidden Forest. The Centaurs only know a fourth of it. If is at least 80km across on the far side lie the ruins of Camelot and other cities supposedly cities of folk lore.

Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade I think is the title.

I'm sorry about the mean reviews. I should've dropped this when I realized I wasn't a fan of the plot.

Yeah, because it makes perfect sense for there to be another prophecy 15 years later instead of the first just covering everything that needed saying. This totally didn't happen to force Dumbledore's hand. Nope.

I don't think Harry would be subtle like that. Why doesn't he just grab his daggers and make the threat apparent? If a wildman wanted to warn someone they wouldn't do it through hint or light suggestion. They'd do it the same way they'd threaten another wild animal by making themselves big, showing their teeth and roaring.

Well that was a copout. She doesn't seem different than other girls because Harry doesn't know any. Literally. He doesn't know a single girl and certainly not this random one. Thinking she's "different" is impossible. He saved her because the story and the ship called for it not because he actually thinks she won't hurt his home. The empathy angle doesn't work either. He killed those dragon handlers no problem which showed he'd left behind modern morality ages ago. You kill threats, not save them.

I'm liking the dinosaur theme and survival aspects but the plotline not so much.

I'm a little dense I guess. I'm now really curious to see what other Tarzan crossovers there are.

Well this fcking sucks. The moment those two decided to enter the wider world for her to lay eggs they sealed the fate of that prehistoric bubble. First the trio, now a werewolf is leading everyone to join them also? That place was left untouched for who knows how long and now it's about to exploit to hell and back. It's depressing to think about what the place might look like 500 to a thousand years later :/

Fluer is crazy. No, seriously. She's running after a dinosaur to recapture an egg for a competition that's very clearly been either paused or will be reheld for fairness. What is she doing?

I already hate bill, fudge, crouch, dumb as a rock door, etc. Only ones I like are Harry, Fleur, Charlie, Allie, Sirius, and Remus (for as much as we saw of those 2.)

I hate how people mark discontinued fics as complete.

Wow Bill's an asshole. Cradle-robbing asshole at that. Too bad the story's discontinued; would've loved to see his ass kicked by Harry.