I loved this, Daniel's lines just made me laugh

Hurm. Simply excellent. Five out of five. )

At the end, you said "Lolling backwards" and I'm not sure if that's what you meant or if you meant "rolling" but it made me laugh because it reminded me of lol ing. XD

Also, I greatly enjoyed the story!

Ah! Such a use of words!

Gorgeously written. I adore the bit where Dan starts laughing and Rorschach gets all confused, it's poetry in motion! :D

this was so good but you defiled my Rorschach. :(

Sweet! I love your work.

WHEW...this was a MAJOR tease...You seem to take that position in your yarns Kazu...are you trying to drive us crazy with frustration? LOL This was SCORCHING hot...Dayumn! XD *faints from the heat*

Sincerely, Mahala A.C.