This is still very cheesy though. But in a good way!

Cutieeee

This is on of the best one-shot I've seen.

Awwwwwwww! That was so short and cute and fantastic! Good job, bravo! *applause* Will you please post a chapter story at some point? I'm sorry if that sounded rude, but I would love to see something of this talent in a full on story! Again bravo!

I was cleaning out my inbox after knowing that with a new story up myself that I should probably take care of what was in there so that they wouldn't sit there for too long. Well, near the back I found this little one-shot that was sent to me nearly two years ago, and surprisingly I hadn't reviewed it.

All in all, short and sweet. Exactly what you want from a one-shot. Not to mention you accomplished what you were aiming for virtually perfectly. Although it's not as easy, the fics where they don't outright come out and say "I love you" can be the most rewarding.

Sorry for the real late review, but better late then never. Well, 'til next time.

I love this one-shot. it is absolutly CUTE. so romantic at the same time. i had never read such a describtive and romantic one-shot in such a long time. i love this alot. i just can't explain any futher how much i love this. fantastic job on this. )

wow... 200 years! I'm surprised that you're still here...

Anyways, Nice oneshot, I mean it's not the cliche types where the two lovers reunite and share a kiss by the sea while the sun sets, that kind of thing.

It's really believable that something could really happen. So... That's why it's so great.

great one-shot!

Loved it! Please for all of us fans, please make more stories! :-)

I think you did a wonderful job I could picture every detail of the story I hope you do another one-shot like this.

wow, that was amazing !

your writing style is remarkable and i could visualize the whole scene in my head.

the quote you chose really pegged what you were trying to express in this story.

i hope you post some more one-shots/stories soon!

-lara

It's just so precious! I loved every word of it. And you're right, there are a lot of reunion stories out there with the same cliche 'i love you' at the end and it tends to get old. But I have to say that this was one of the best reunion stories i've read and i've read a lot so congratulations. It did not totally suck, it rocked. Don't worry about not posting something in so long, it happens to the best of us. Great story! ;p

That was awesome! I hope there will be more stories in the future!

Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review EVAR, btches!

Now...this...was...N-I-CE!

Indeed, there wasn't THAT much cheese here, but bein' the romantic sucker that I am, I woulda given ya an "AW3SOME!" instead of a "N-I-CE!". LOL

However!

That does NOT, in ANY way, make this thing any less good.

Nice work, marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!