| Reviews for Everyone has darkness |
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Dbot15112002 chapter 48 . 7/13 I want a fucking sequel. |
Kimcil sabeleng chapter 43 . 7/13 Fuck |
lameduck987 chapter 8 . 6/22 Yeah... I tried giving this a chance but its shit, I'm out |
lameduck987 chapter 5 . 6/22 This is so hard to read this naruto is so fucking retarded. Did you base him on the most toxic person you could think of? |
lameduck987 chapter 3 . 6/22 Wow 1 hour with out cumming that's retarded. |
lameduck987 chapter 2 . 6/22 RKO is so stupid |
NKLove chapter 33 . 4/12 Come back to read ur stories thinking that u already remove this Nej*x M*i shit scene and what a surprise YOU DIDN'T DO IT... What a disappointed. Bcoz of this chap i almost throw this story out years ago but since both bitch died later and Tht bitch M*i even have a gut before died to say that the time she only got to spending with bitch nej* is so little. Seriously man, your story is superb and very good. If im a Hollywood director, i find u to make script for my movie. Sigh.. It such a shame bcoz one tiny shit make almost this good story to go shit. I just wanna say it bro, it ur story u can do what u want. I'll keep support and repeated read ur stories but I'll skip tht shit part... #peace #stayathome |
thegrison chapter 2 . 3/17 Funny but that is all. It just boring with zero sense behind it. |
Tenjo chapter 2 . 2/26 Okay... so on top of having the edgiest idea of what looks cool, you also overplay sarcasm to try make Naruto seem witty and to really drive home the fact that he doesn’t care about anyone anymorecompletely ignoring the fact that if he truly didn’t care, there would be no reason for this story to exist because he’d never come back in the first place. You also throw the ‘witty’ sarcasm into the narration, which makes it unbearable. That your idea of sarcasm is “Hmm... [insert inane comment to make Naruto look like a twat]”, just makes it worse still. I’m not even two chapters in and it’s annoyed me. |
Tenjo chapter 1 . 2/26 So he looks like a faggot who wishes he was a biker..? And I’m supposed to believe Tsunade, a grown woman who has likely seen many good looking guys found him so attractive she lost her train of thought? Nope. Don’t buy it. |
Guest chapter 13 . 2/12 Anko HELL YEAH |
ChiDead chapter 49 . 2/11 Not bad gotta love drak fic. |
Guest chapter 36 . 1/18 Don’t bother reading . This “evil” naruto lets other dudes fuck his girls with no punishment what so ever. He’s a cuck |
Iamfreakingout chapter 3 . 1/16 love that description of orichimaru |
Iamfreakingout chapter 1 . 1/16 hahahhahahahahahah lol |