Ok I realize it might be stupid leaing a rewiew on such an old story, but I felt like it.

I really liked this. However, I found myself pissed of at Erin. I strongly suspect this is because I am queer, and I'm being irrational, but I just... dislike her. I get that it must have been terrible, and it was a different time, but why is she mad at her dad, and not the society that kept them apart?

What I want to say with all this drivel is that, I think that makes this story so great. When you forget that it's just a character, and you honestly want to just reach out and shake them you know? If you had been a lesseer writer, I would have been annoyed (at the character, not you) but nothing more would have come of it. But your story seems to suck me in so I almost feel like I'm standing behind them.

I hope you become a professional writer someday. You certanly have the talent.

Oh, this was good. This was really good. I don't have time for an extensive review, but this is so being added to my community.

beautiful.

~Frankie

Wow, this is REALLY good. I loved Erin's progression from the story, and of course I'm a sap for happy endings. I think everyone of the characters was great in this story, and the way you worked things into the story, like Charlie, that progressed throughout was a nice touch. Great job!

I absolutely positively love it! I love it so much that I can't not leave a reveiw! I've always wondered about Erin and this gave her a character I love, not to mention that I'm a sucker for slash. I love it! I really do!

~DancingWithRoses