Reviews for Keep Breathing
Guest chapter 13 . 2/29
this was so beautiful. the ending was amazing, it made my eyes water. thank you for this :)
lucel18 chapter 13 . 1/19/2019
loooooove it! Thank you so much!
lucel18 chapter 12 . 1/19/2019
Gah! love it! Even though it's so tragic! lol...
lucel18 chapter 11 . 1/19/2019
Yikes! No! What does he mean by that?
lucel18 chapter 10 . 1/19/2019
Awwwwwww...you got Obi-wan's humor right on the nail..Lol..love that he's there for Padme even though he's gone physically
lucel18 chapter 9 . 1/19/2019
love your use of angst here...lol..my heart is breaking for Jinn and Padme..to learn of Obi-wan's demise and to part because of Vader
lucel18 chapter 8 . 1/19/2019
Looooooove this chapter! Though i'm saddened by Obi-wan's death, at least he and Padme stood their own against Vader...
lucel18 chapter 7 . 1/19/2019
I wonder how this confrontation will turn out..
lucel18 chapter 6 . 1/19/2019
OMG! This is so sad if it's true..this news about Obi-wan...
lucel18 chapter 5 . 1/19/2019
i really do hope Obi-wan doesn't die...and that Luke and Leia would forgive him and Padme for keeping the whole truth from them..
lucel18 chapter 4 . 1/19/2019
Ouch...that hurts but it's the truth ...about Anakin still being a part of Padme's heart...
i like the different comparisons of Anakin's love and Obi-wan's love for Padme...
lucel18 chapter 3 . 1/19/2019
Awww! They have a child together...
Ooof! That question about Anakin hurts...
lucel18 chapter 2 . 1/19/2019
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! i love it!
lucel18 chapter 1 . 1/19/2019
I really like this AU for many reasons...one, Obidala, of course...though i'm not sure if this fic will mainly feature their friendship or if it'll include romance as well...secondly, Padme is alive and third, Obi-wan being all paternal to Luke and Leia is just heartwarming...thank you!
Amalthia chapter 2 . 7/15/2018
Lovely story!
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