This fic was absolutely adorable! You captured everyone's personalities perfectly and the story was very well written.

Oh my god, when was this made? I love it!

Francis is a grade A asshole :)) I loved this. It's so good. Thank you.

Well that was weird

I never thought I would ever read a Francis X Louis fanfic in my life, but bravo to you. That was very well written and engaging. I loved it. Thank you for sharing this with the world. n_n

"Don't you stop! Imagine them in white hoods and don't fucking stop!"

That was morbidly hilarious. XD

We need more LouisxFrancis on this site, damnit!

I read for the Bill/Zoey.

Very well written and great characterization.

Fantastic job.

Fantastic chapter. _ I really like the interaction between Louis and Francis, you do them teriffically.

Very interesting. I know little to nothing about Left 4 Dead, (not really my scene) but this was good. I'd definitely read more of this from you.

Of the few people who write my OTP, you are the best C: I looove their relationship here. Write more pleasepleasepleaseplease?

First of all, I love you, lol. I'm glad you made this a two-fer. I'm half expecting another chapter from this; summer IS pretty boring as it is. That was my hint. Do iiiiiiit :) j/k you don't have to.

Second of all, very good job :3

Awesome does not even BEGIN to describe this. You do a really good job keeping them in character. I hope to get some more soon! 8D

wow great chapter. im glad you updated your story. keep up the good work

Mm I love me a good one shot :) I hope you post more of these!

I definitely love the way Louis and Francis regard each other and of course the war vet brats commentary, haha! Nicely said ;)

Gonna write any for L4D2?

More please! I want to see where this is headed, I REALLY like it so far! Great job with the characters! *buries you in hearts*