10/10 M8. Good graphics and quickscopes, would read again - IGN and Mountain Dew Blokes

cute

I really liked this story. It feels like that would be what Phantom would have done in a situation like that. Keep up the great writing!

Augh! You can't do this to mee! I stumble on this on tumblr and I'm like "yay decent fanfiction!" and then this was really good and then there's no continuation!

good story

oooh how sweet

Very nice! I came across this again and liked it just as much as before. It was a good premise and you worked well with it. The descriptions worked well and the story turned out quite nicely. I can definitely see Danny breaking down if something like that happened. And you handled Valerie well, still balancing her hatred of Phantom with her temporary truce/therapy session.

Sapphireswimming

This was such a good story! I loved that Valerie was able to see past her problems with Danny, even for only a few minutes, to help him. It would be great to see more stories like this!

Radio Out

Good story! The idea is great! Good job! .

ech, my entire school got that. nothing wroks better than a vaccine than making everyone sick.

well, at least it's not two out of three...,

brittney

Aw!

This is so sweet! _

Aw. Nice job *thumbs up*!

This really is an amazing show of writing here! Great job.

Wow... That was an amazing story. I loved the conversation between Valerie and Danny.

Very good story. Yeah, Danny would react just like that if unable to save someone.

Keep the good writing.