This was a really cute AsaKiku, but there was that one mistake in the beginning, when you accidently put Alfred, when you probably meant Arthur.

Aside from that, it was so cute~~~

that does make japan look seem like a girl... even i know that the closest to wearing a kimono for guys in japan is a Yukata which is for summer instead of winter (which is what a kimono's main ppurpose was for) and can be worn by both boys and girls _

kya! flushed and stuttering Arthur is adorable!

So kawaii... I love the description of Kiku in the Kimono.

There was one small mistake at the begining, I could be wrong, but I think you accidentally called Arthur Alfred?

Such a cute fic, I wish I could write fluff this good.

~Tsubame-go

It's been a while since I've seen a cute Japan/England fanfic. And since I saw one now, it purifies my heart even more.

Other than the error on "Alfred" instead of Arthur. It was a very cute story. Don't worry everybody makes mistakes, just try to be much more careful in typing.

But it is really a nice story, I enjoyed it. Especially England's Mixed Tsun-Tsun-Dere-Dere and Japan's calm perso.

Arthur's not OOC, he's just losing his touch at being tsundere XD

I honestly think that this is very sweet.

Arthur is somehow characteristically tsundere, and I like how calm and cool you made Kiku here.

I do admit that you still need some work. I think you wrote Alfred's name in place of Arthur's by accident: “How about a walk in the sakura gardens,” Kiku suggested. “It will give us plenty of time to talk and catch up, ne?”

“Y-yeah,” Alfred said. “That…sounds good."

My biggest advice is to always proof-read your work.

( o 3o)

I hope to see more from you soon.

Take Care,

SoundsRight

Hm, this was decent. (Bows apologetically)

But you said "Alfred" a couple times instead of "Arthur". That really threw me off.

I have only two issues with this fic. Firstly is that you have substituted Alfred's name for Arthur's name in a couple of sentences. Second: the colour white in Asia is actually reserved purely for funerals and mourning and is thus associated with death.

Other than that this was actually very cute. I like the idea of a walk in the cherry trees and the lychee simile.

a really cute asakiku! I like it!

CUTE!

Very cute :3 Just one little thing:

“Y-yeah,” Alfred said. “That…sounds good.

“Right,” Alfred said, straightening himself out to look more serious.

I think you meant to put Arthur here. Apart from that, very nicely done