I liked this, and am glad the two got back together, even though I'm still mad at Octavius for cheating on Jed and then punching him. That was not cool.

It's an OK story. And I also get a lot of ideas from songs.

huh...well not that i am not happy that they got together but somehow there is alot missing...like...how can jed trust him just like that after he saw him cheating...or what was this about the other man that octavius did not thought he was cheating on jed...

you should ad an sequel to clearivy it...otherwise its a really sweet story..just the end is a bit sudden

Yikes! Jed had every reason to get pissed. Octavius cheated on him. D: Not cool. At least everything was sorted out. Those two are meant to be. :3

o my gosh u published this on my birthday! great present; it was amazing3

that was reall cute!