So cute oh my god

proper ahh? anyway still as always I LOVE IT! ok i admit it i love all fsnfics of edwin

This was a really good story, I wish there was more of it. The only thing you might want to change is you used the word leant a lot and you might want to change that to leaned. It just reads better. Also I couldn't tell if Al was back to normal or not. But I really enjoyed it and will definitely read it again.

this was a good story till the last line which made it just AWESOME. i laughed so much when al said it was about time ed got some PROPER medicine.

Lotsa fluffy goodness in this story. I love your work. :) Always making winry the heroine. It's super cute!

It was avey cute story. It was good. I loved the ending. I liked how you made Al emphasized the word proper in his last sentence (that made me crack up).